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Chapter 16

Ah Magpie, you tease! They were so close! Lol

Karkaroff looks like he is going to be a pest though!

I am definitely looking forward to your next update! :D

Oh, oh, oh, you tease! I was just getting that hint of lemon freshness...gah! I like the way you use Karkaroff; he is delightfully sinister.

Need to get Sev and Mia closer together sooooon!

Nice update; hope we'll get another soon.

Never go out on Black Lake when the moon be full! Or is the Hogwarts Lake really called the black lake? Can't remember.

You know when I first saw this story, I almost wondered if it was a crossover since there is an anime character named Skuld in Oh My Goddess. Of course, I don

I love the image of Mia as this little wood nymphy thing, wafting over Severus like a breeze.

This was a very sensual chapter; I really enjoyed it. It can't be long before full-on lemons fall from the sky, can it? Come on, Mia, ditch old snake-tongue and get with Snape!

Yay; keep up the secretive work xx.

*drools* lord i hope she picks snape and snape kicks the other guys ass.........mmmmm snapey smut

What the heck is going on with the listing on this board? I nearly missed it because it didn't go to the top for some reason.

Anyways...great to have an update. Mia was lucky to have that elf blood then, disapparating from Snape's place. Barty Crouch Jr is really nasty, isn't he? Poor old Mia must be besotted to put up with him (especially looking like Mad-Eye, bleurgh!) Snape will stop at nothing until he finds out the truth, I reckon.

I like the little canon touches - Harry and Ron warning her against the twins' 'gratitude' for de-aging them was very cute.

Hope it's not such a long wait till the next instalment - I guess going to Whitby must have inspired you!

oooh more please

I didn't know that about the 'Skuld' being from Norse mythology; interesting revelation. I'd be a bit affronted if somebody accused me of being descended from a House Elf too. Lol, I can't abide Dobby.

Good thought of Sev's with the Veritaserum...oh yeah, I like his interrogation style...staring into her eyes, nose touching. Wow, remind me to nick some potions from his storecupboard one day.

Argh, but she fainted! Not that I blame her. I'd probably do the same.

So now he knows she's genuinely attracted to him...what's he going to do about THAT?

Oh my oh my, I'm only up to chapter 4, and reading while away, but I'm definitely curious. Where can I get a tree like Severus'? I'm fairly certain they don't carry them at my local garden shop! Thanks for sharing, Pitt