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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was incredible. I could barely contain myself. Please continue!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that was so hot. Please write more - don't leave it there. I love Draco stories, he is delicious. Oh, the leather and whips and being tied up, Draco calling Harry master and the hot, hot sex. Oh, god, gotta go!!!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. ::stops breathing a sec, groan:: After reading that, I'm really hot and bothered!!! But seriously, that was amazing...just amazing! WHOA, Harry and Draco just belong together...that's all I got to say!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
Thsi is starrose, the maker of the video you based this on. I haven't read this yet (cos i'm at work i can't get away with it ^^;), but i just wanted to say i shall post a link to this from my video site so fans of my vids can read this ^_^
Thsi is starrose, the maker of the video you based this on. I haven't read this yet (cos i'm at work i can't get away with it ^^;), but i just wanted to say i shall post a link to this from my video site so fans of my vids can read this ^_^
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2/AN--awww, thanks for the mention! That's so sweet of you! Yes, yes, I am a silly hornball. (Hey, it happens...but I'm going to be seeing my ex for one night, so maybe some of this tension will be relieved...haha yes, the tension from reading your story!)
GOD I'm such a sucker for Harry/Draco!
If the prequel is going to be strictly Harry/Ron, my advice would be to put it in the "Harry/Ron" category with a note at the beginning of the first chapter that this is the "leading up to" of THIS story, and say that this story is in Harry/Draco.
And then add a note into the beginning of THIS story saying that the prequel is in the other section. That way, the Harry/Ron people get a sexxxy story (that will also stand on its own as a oneshot, I'd imagine) and they can leave it at that, if they want, or if they want to come and read Harry/Draco, they can, too.
Plus, that lets all of US know to read the prequel, even if it's Harry/Ron. And THEN you can add the real "Chapter 2" sequel to THIS story of what happens next between Harry/Draco (and a submissive Ron?)
Okay, that's just my advice! I hope it helps! Thanks again for the mention...I write the review as I read, which means it comes out as my reaction/emotions to the story, so that's what you get. lol That's just how I do it best, so I'm glad that you like my method. :) Your story was awesome!
GOD I'm such a sucker for Harry/Draco!
If the prequel is going to be strictly Harry/Ron, my advice would be to put it in the "Harry/Ron" category with a note at the beginning of the first chapter that this is the "leading up to" of THIS story, and say that this story is in Harry/Draco.
And then add a note into the beginning of THIS story saying that the prequel is in the other section. That way, the Harry/Ron people get a sexxxy story (that will also stand on its own as a oneshot, I'd imagine) and they can leave it at that, if they want, or if they want to come and read Harry/Draco, they can, too.
Plus, that lets all of US know to read the prequel, even if it's Harry/Ron. And THEN you can add the real "Chapter 2" sequel to THIS story of what happens next between Harry/Draco (and a submissive Ron?)
Okay, that's just my advice! I hope it helps! Thanks again for the mention...I write the review as I read, which means it comes out as my reaction/emotions to the story, so that's what you get. lol That's just how I do it best, so I'm glad that you like my method. :) Your story was awesome!
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel loved....... :) I'm glad you liked my idea! btw i don't know if i mentioned it but i hunted down that vid you saw on youtube (lol very funny) and that person seems to be fond of making slash vids XD some are pretty nice!
NEways i think you could do it either way if you wanted to.... but if you put it in the other section you'd just have to do another AN ok? please? i don't happen to frequent that catagory lol....
Or you could just make it one big series (write the prequel and rearange and then write the sequel as the next chapter) hell if you wanted to make it **section appropriate** wink wink you could make harry have a dream with him and malfoy or something like that
just thoughts :)
But please keep up the wonderful writing!
NEways i think you could do it either way if you wanted to.... but if you put it in the other section you'd just have to do another AN ok? please? i don't happen to frequent that catagory lol....
Or you could just make it one big series (write the prequel and rearange and then write the sequel as the next chapter) hell if you wanted to make it **section appropriate** wink wink you could make harry have a dream with him and malfoy or something like that
just thoughts :)
But please keep up the wonderful writing!
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong that I am now horny as fuck?
Prolly so lol.
But that was hot as hell!
Please write more! I need it!!!
Prolly so lol.
But that was hot as hell!
Please write more! I need it!!!
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1--okay, honestly, I almost didn't click on this just because I was so afraid of the DM/RW pairing...I'm Harry/Draco all the way (it's Harry/Draco or nothing with me lol) But FUCK! I shouldn't have worried in the least! This was HOT HOT HOTHOTHOT!!!! So good!
Okay, I'll say it...FUCK Ron can watch all he wants! Hell, all of Hogwarts can watch for all I care, as long as it's Harry and Draco, baby! SO GOOD
OHHHH FUCK Draco's orgasm was nothing short of spectacular! Ron's watching...Ron's watching...Ron's...KISSING DRACO???!?!?!?!??!?!?!!!??!?! *growl* You know, I thought I'd be more upset than I actually am, so good for you!
*whimper* shit! SHIT SHIT SHIT! I don't know whether to be happy or sad that Draco wants to...*shudder*...suck him. *pout* I guess I wanted Harry to be Draco's first. But then again, I also want Draco to practice and get good for Harry...FUCK I don't know what I want! And trust me, no one loves giving head more than I do, but Draco's mouth belong's on Harry's cock...not Ron's.
(Sorry, Ron)
Mmmmm, YES and we're back into the GOOD STUFF! THE STUFF I NEED! YES HARRY FUCK DRACO'S ARSE! YES YES YES OH JESUS
HOT HARD AND DEEP HOT HOT HOT OH GOD!!!!!
I'm definitely hot under the collar after reading this! SO FUCKING GOOD! If you do a sequel...*gulp* is Ron going to fuck Draco? (I'm going to hope no, but I trust that it'll be okay)
I'd rather Ron watch while Harry spanks Draco...he's been such a naughty boy, after all...and I'm sure that he won't be able to help just falling facedown over Harry's knee...*hot and bothered now*
Okay, I'll say it...FUCK Ron can watch all he wants! Hell, all of Hogwarts can watch for all I care, as long as it's Harry and Draco, baby! SO GOOD
OHHHH FUCK Draco's orgasm was nothing short of spectacular! Ron's watching...Ron's watching...Ron's...KISSING DRACO???!?!?!?!??!?!?!!!??!?! *growl* You know, I thought I'd be more upset than I actually am, so good for you!
*whimper* shit! SHIT SHIT SHIT! I don't know whether to be happy or sad that Draco wants to...*shudder*...suck him. *pout* I guess I wanted Harry to be Draco's first. But then again, I also want Draco to practice and get good for Harry...FUCK I don't know what I want! And trust me, no one loves giving head more than I do, but Draco's mouth belong's on Harry's cock...not Ron's.
(Sorry, Ron)
Mmmmm, YES and we're back into the GOOD STUFF! THE STUFF I NEED! YES HARRY FUCK DRACO'S ARSE! YES YES YES OH JESUS
HOT HARD AND DEEP HOT HOT HOT OH GOD!!!!!
I'm definitely hot under the collar after reading this! SO FUCKING GOOD! If you do a sequel...*gulp* is Ron going to fuck Draco? (I'm going to hope no, but I trust that it'll be okay)
I'd rather Ron watch while Harry spanks Draco...he's been such a naughty boy, after all...and I'm sure that he won't be able to help just falling facedown over Harry's knee...*hot and bothered now*
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHHH that WAS HOT O_O I wrote a Ron/Draco fanfic once but ever since I've only been able to read Harry/Draco ones but this has REKINDLED MY LOVE haha even if it's more Harry/Draco than with Ron, OH WELL, that was just bloody awesome hahahah I love how Draco was the only one unaware that all these boys were lusting after him and Harry was in love with him X_X hahaha sooooo great!
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that was hot. Had a pretty arousing effect on me anyway, can't wait to see what comes next.