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by LovelessNekoMimi

schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its good!!
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an ass Harry is!
person schenlark
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! you have a nice one going here, i'm looking forward to it's progress..
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco, Harry's acting like such a bastard... I'm sure he'll come around though. Update more soon.
person travchan
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope you dont threaten the chapters if you dont get reviews, but i'll try for everyone you put out. this is good, some what cliche with the mate but i haven't read one with draco dealing with the rejection before good job!
person shiva
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor draco!!! WRITE MORE!!!!
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Draco! Wtf! What is Harry's problem? I'm with Hermione! Sooo need chapter 3!
person rosiel
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update ,please!!!!
person Blondel
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was pretty much disgusted by Harry's behaviour in Chapter 1 already, but his brutal rejection of Draco in this chapter really made me hate him. Not just refusing to take responsibility for the consequences of his actions, but calling Draco a liar and a slut as well! As far as I'm concerned, he doesn't deserve anyone's love, and I hope he comes to regret his behaviour bitterly in the end.

My sympathies are all with Draco so far, and I really feel for the horrible dilemma he is in at the moment. Aren't there any adults he could confide in, for example Snape, if not his parents? Why does he think he wouldn't be welcome in the Infirmary - is it because he is only part human? I loved your version of Dobby, by the way - his compassion and attempt to do the best he can for Draco is really endearing.

Looking forward to the rest of your story - it will be interesting to see how you solve Draco's dilemma. I hope he comes out of it happy and alive.
person Extraho
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
harry is such a git!!! i reall hope it works out in the end, or that draco overcomes his heritiage and doesn't die, then harry regrets it when he sees his baby- not that i think Draco should forgive him. (??????)please hurry up with the next chapter