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moca, do you have a copy or did you write an au chapter 25, the scene between hermione was just soo good and i was really wondering if you didn't write one yet would you consider writing one in which they did go through with the sex. I'm a true h/h shipper but this story with geoffrey seems to really need more of a peak then him not having her, i don't know that jus maybe me. But if you do or are willing to write about another scene please e-mail i would gladly read and maybe even throw some ideas your way if neeeded(though i highly doubt it you write superbly well already). Thanks.

Moca plz update soon, this story has me hooked i'm like checking on it every other day, plz plz update soon.

Bad Hermione... drinking while pregnant. One- who knows what's in it, and two,- Harry would be upset. I hope she finds a way out of this without giving Geoffrey any... or should I say without letting Geoffrey take any... sigh. Good Update. :)

wow, you can't just leave me with a cliffie like that please please post soon. This is my favorite fanficton on AFF, and prolly favorite adult one.

I think this story is interesting in a number of ways: contrasts, venal fears, and just a lot of struggling with circumstances.

I admit I was thoroughly disgusted by Draco in this story. You did a damn good job. You completely changed my predisposition to like him. I also thought of his character as being misguided and basically self centered. In this fic, he is a monster. By the time the souls rose from the curse, I didn't want him to have the cousin Anita. I wanted him to rot in hell especially raping Hermione and losing a baby. He was just vicious, sadistic, incestuous, cruel and evil hearted. No redemptive qualities by your character sketch.

I don't know where this Shroud guy gets off trying to get in between a committed couple especially believing he had a right of a woman's body by bribing her. What kind of crap is that? I have completely bought into your AU HP story.

I don't know when you posted this, but if it was a while ago sorry it took me so long to review, I had internet issues... like it was off, lol. Anyhoo really good update. I was wondering where the side story would lead. All the ghosts coming out was probably really creepy, but really cool at the same time. I think I would've felt like Harry... mostly stunned. I hope Harry wakes up to save the day, Hermione doesn't need anymore stress...

Sorry it took so long for me to review, I've been working the night shift, and it's hard to catch up with stories. Yes, I like this version much better still. Much more drama to look forward to... maybe, lol. Good Update.

Good Update. I love reading about old love stories, and their mysteries. Sure I can e-mail you... if I figire out how nto get yours, lol. Hopefully mines shows in the mean time.

I read some reviews and totally disagree with sweetgirl, the added factor of lord geoffrey brings on a whole new chapter to add to the hardships of harry//hermione's happy ending. it will allow you to add more to the overall plot while not drifitng from the overll theme of the story which is hardships in the way of harry and hermione's relationship. Sometimes full blown h/hr lovers dislike having another suitor for hermione, i must agree with that but only to an extent, it must be well written for me to ot dislike those stories and this story has been very well thought and written. I have not read anything i would deem superflous because it has not seem that you are adding plot just for plot but instead am turning the story to another chapter/segment. Keep up the good work and i hope to read more soon.

Uh oh, a bit of trouble there at the end hun? Or maybe it'll be surprise wedding... I know I'm reaching, sorry, lol. But yea for Hermione really feeling like she could be pregnant. Good Update.