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Loved it! Poor Lucius all he wanted to do was to comfort Hermione. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

well were to begin....yes i know you well enough but it never hurts to make sure! ;) and sense i menchioned it i think you wanted us all to wait and not just cause you were tired! :) but i will say it was worth the wait! miscarriage-ouch! well that explains some boy does lucius have his work cut out for him. i will be most fun to see what he will do and i will just have to go slightly crazy waiting wont i? if i find anything on celt marriages i will let you know. until next time!! (just PLEASE dont make us wait too long -k-?)

wow .. so that is why she does not want to be a round him ... i hope he plan works.. later for now

angel

Cool story. I like stories that switch between then and now. Please do it often, and show all the parallels between the couples and how they've learned from their past mistakes (or not!). Good writing and you've really got me hooked. :)

I liked the second chapter. It really got me going :D

OMG this is FABULOUS! :) Ok and for cookies, I have never seen anyone use todger before, so that is brilliant! :) How wonderful!!!! I can't wait to read more!

Chapter 2: Hermione sloshed and willing. Nice work for Lucius. (Yea! Narcissa is dead. Cough...excuse the outburst.)

I thought you waited until chapter 8 for the sex? I am thrilled you've broken the mold for this story. Now no fair sneaking Snape into Hermione's shorts when Lucius isn't looking!!!

So the Weasley men are all well hung? I knew there had to be some reason Molly chose Arthur over Lucius, although it sounds like it's a dead heat in the hung department.

So far the modern day Lucius seems nicer, too, even with the small reference to his disreputable past, which is true to his character. I like him this way for this story. He was understanding, not a jerk, when he found out about the baby. But this Lucius never had one-night stands? Never? I guess he did love his wife. Oh, well, no one's perfect (and she's dead so that's okay - snerk.)

Now THAT'S unbelievable - that Lucius would be willing to drink instant coffee. The mind boggles.

"two cute little pimples" - do you mean 'dimples' or are pimples the same in England?

Ooooh, I just ate up this chapter. Sex and sincere feelings from Lucius. That's rather novel for this early in a Lucius story. Yes, I like that very much. Very much, indeed!! More, please...

Not a bad start, but i really can't see the Hermione character asking Aphrodite for help. She seems more of an Athena type.

Wow! What a great idea for a story! You are really creative! I just love the idea of Lucius decked out as a Roman General! And the whole idea of Hermione being his slave is very hot! I can't wait till your next chapter! Please update soon!

wow great start .. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel