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by Rumpelyssa

schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy this afternoon when I got on and found that I had not one, but two chapters to read. I enjoyed both very much and I feel so bad for poor Hermione. My heart goes out to her, and also to lucius for the hard job he has ahead of him.

I love how he just keeps gritting his teeth and telling himself I just have to prove to her I won't hurt her. It reminds me of my own love and how long and hard he worked to show me I could trust him before I finally believed... (had a few teary moments as I could understand how she feels)

Oh, and I need to let you know... in A Ghostly Curse... Harry is gone, so I'm not being unfaithful to your loyalty to Ginny not being with anyone else while Harry is still alive. But I didn't kill him off in th4e Final battle. I should have chapter 5 up probably sometime in the next day or so.

Ok, enough now... just update soon as I am looking forward to it!

Shiloh
person mary
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Poor Severus, well at least he warned Lucius! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person sinbad
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd really like to see more of this story, it is an original concept in the sense that Hermione and Lusicus are related, and you are weaving quite a tale.
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good couple of chapters i enjoyed very much hope you update soon
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray, another chap in double-quick time and with a lovely lemon to boot. Poor Hermione/Lucius re. the baby though. Would she ever have told him if she had kept the babe? Tut tut, Hermione. It's fun to read about Lucius unrequitedly besotted - so novel. Looking forward to the next update.
person 999
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, so Lucius and Hermione had a drunken love encounter. That is so hot! And I loved the way they were so chatty as they undressed and got into bed. I always imagine both of them as being quite verbose. Now Lucius is besotted with her. That
person kittycat30
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go Lucius! I would love to have him after me :) Can't wait for more...
person wicraven
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this!!! "Poor" Hermione, that lucky girl wont know what hit her before Lucius have got his wicked way with her, wedding band and all:-)) I look forward to see him achieve his goal:-))
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw... so kawaii!! Cute, cute, cute. Maybe it's just me but personally I don't find pimples very attractive. But then again I am not Lucius either. lol