rate_review Reviews

Brilliant chapter looking forward to reading more very very soon hopefully

Very nice chapter! I am looking forward to the next.

Well, that was another goodie. I can see this becoming one of your larger stories, well done.

I am still enjoying the tale :)

Lucius has his work cut out for him. I think he's up to the challenge. Slave/master relationships usually bother me, but I really like this one. Really, I just love Lucius in this story :) Can't wait for more.

Loved it! Poor Severus he cares for Hermione but he seems to love his cousin more. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Hmmm... I gotta queston... Did you know that Helen of Troy had a daughter named Hermione? Is this Slave Hermione her daughter? If she was then it would certainly explain her being so beautiful that General Lucius is so enamored of her.

Poor Hermione. That is terrible to feel that it is her fault about losing Lucius' baby. That would be a big reasoning factor as to why she can't seem to bear a man to touch her... (Besides the fact of her being raped) Lucius needs to just go hex the balls off of that muggle creton! Perhaps Ginny and Harry could give him a good taste of Bat Bogie curse!!!

I love this story. It is very original and I have to admit, Although I love all your stories... this one is fastly becoming my favorite!

Shiloh

well i certainly enjoyed reading it! and yes i do love where you are taking the general and slave counter parts! boy i wonder what lucuis will do when he finds out that..that bastard steven is getting out and i really wonder what the men in her life will do to said bastard once all this comes to a head? (boy if that didnt sound like a suggestion i dont now what does.) :) well as always i will be waiting happily and impateicently for the next chapter!! update soon. :)

wow that was awsome i love it ... and i love where to left the general and slave that was hot.. and will mione tell harry what happen to her .. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

Your use of a few Roman words really helped to keep me in the time period. Splendid work!