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I think that when Hermione finds out that Lucius has to go to Azkaban, she will go nuts and probably offer to confess what Steven did to her in court. Don

Chapter 5: So Lucius thinks Hermione is really pretty and like the red (or maybe I should say blue) -blooded male he is, he's angling to delve into her knickers. But how clever of him to recognize her outfit as her comfort barrier.

And it sounds like he's making some headway with her, not jumping her and scaring her away.

Ooooh, Pride and Prejudice. I just adore that aloof, prideful, and underneath awkwardly shy Darcy. Colin Firth can jump in my lake any day. But I think Hermione should have chosen Sense and Sensibility. Then you could have introduced Colonel Christopher Brandon and snuck "Snape" into your story in another guise. That colonel was one HOT Alan Rickman.

Well about time someone knocked off that arsehole Steven. He was wasting good air by continuing to breathe. What I don't understand is why Lucius just left his body for anyone to find. And now Severus has to turn Lucius in? Is he the Magic police? Confused here. Snape should just help Lucius dump the body. There must be miles of countryside needing some good fertilizer.

Well, I'll have to wait and hope Lucius gets off from having to go to prison. Hermione knew Lucius killed Steven. Does that make her an accessory after the fact? She didn't try to turn in Lucius.

Wow, Lucius killing for love. That is an interesting concept overall. I an interested to see what happens next and how Harry holds the delicate balance.

Hooray for Lucius, kicking Steven's arse. And good choice of DVD too - 'Pride and Prejudice'. Hermione should def have made Lucius walk out of a lake wearing that shirt. Swooooooon.

you know you could make a career out of people wanting to hurt you, you know that dont you? (just kidding) well maybe not entirely. i am pretty mad you could drive a person nuts! i really do hope there is mush and love and herestically crying in the next chapter. :) i am now going to threaten you if you dont get a chapter up really soon. :) love me.


ps you do know this is all in good humor, dont you? except getting the posting soon.

That was good! I'm wondering how Stephen knew where she was too! Quite unexpected! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Lucius should not go to Azkaban! He killed for love! We should all ban together to protest such an action! LOL. Just kidding. It would be funny if it did it happen though. And I loved the reference to the 1995 TV miniseries of Pride and Prejudice with Colin Firth, I love that series!

man ..im gald they talked and that lucius took care of steven and i hope harry and mione can get him off... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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Ah, slavemaster Lucius, what a guy. Am I imagining that there might be a connection between rotten Flavius and rotten Steven?

Love it!! But is Flavius like Steven? Will Slave Hermione have the same kind of experience as Hermione did? And will General Lucius sort it out for her? (As Lucius is surely going to for Hermione?) :) Have some magic biscuits fr your superb story.