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for Invasion

by Rumpelyssa

schedule April 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I think Lucius might have been put on trial. Harry might help him get out. I'm glad Steven is dead. Hopefully Lucius will not be sent to Azkaban. I enjoyed reading this story!

person Anon
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is just getting to the good part and you stopped up-loading. I know that real life takes precedence over things like this, but it would be nice if a note or two was droped once in a while to let us readers know that you are alive and healthy.
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you I love your story! I think it is so creative and you have such a brilliant premise. You have been such an inspiration to me thank you. And I really hope you decide to finish it someday!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
write more please...this is good
person firefairy
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. Please please keep me updated.

person Rosamund
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story I found tonight...this is quite the delight! I adore this setting for Hermione and Lucius! Oh, glad Steven is no more. Now, more Hermione and Lucius please! No Azkaban for him!
person katie
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great work love your stories cant wait to see more
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon! Love the story and look foward to reading more.
person BuffyXO
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the fact that Lucius killed Steven. He deserved it. I just wonder who was helping him in his search for Hermione. I do think that someone had to aid him seeing that it took Lucius such a long time to find her. I just hope that she can forgive him and not fear his rage. Keep up the great work on this story and your others, it makes my day when I see that you have updated one of your stories. Cheers!
person Marcus Licinius Crassus
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next, with regards to Snape and Lucius, and to see Lucius act as though a Gryffindor rather than the cool, calculating Slytherin, was interesting.
And that leering, slobbering letch called Stephen deserved to die - well done.