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for The Labyrinth

by graballz

schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
found my movie so i re-read and watched the movie now i better see the characters you used versus the ones in the movie. i really like your version. do enjoy ron as ludo. to cool. cant wait to see who you use for what character.

schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so well done and is following the movie quite wonderfully. One thing I like is that at one point, I think before the cleaners, either Jareth ir Sara calls Hoggle Hogwarts which made me laugh the last time I watched this movie I just thought I would mention and see if anyone else had noticed that.

ailish

Beta for C. McClain
person misslala
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just made it through what you have completed so far and I LOVE IT! :) I love Labyrinth!!! hahaha This is brilliant! :) I LOVE IT! Dance Magic is my favorite song./scene though and Bowie is HOOOOOT in that movie. I could imagine Bowie as Lucius like he was in the 80s, LOL MY GOD RAWR! *Fans self* I can't wait to see where you take this from here on out! And I have updates!!!!!!!! PLEASE HURRY AND WRITE THIS DAMN THING!
person misslala
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love how you are incorporating each character, and I can so see it happening that way too! You just don't know how my heart jumps when I read a story that I can really get into. Its so amazing! :) I can't wait to read more!!!!! I can't wait to see where you have the twins, aside from h/D the twins are my little dirty secret, haha

My friend has a copy of "Apples to Apples" and we have a "Weasley Twins" Card that almost ALWAYS wins the way we play it, LOL It is so entertaining. Our next purchase will be the German version, because it is just to cool not to own a copy when you speak a little German :)

OMG - whew! I am so looking forward to your next chapter. I tried to IM you a few times, but damn it seems you are never on, when do you return to the states?
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7

I knew from the moment I saw the title that the old man would be dumbledore, but I laughed so hard when his hat turned out to be a pheonix XDD

I'm still loving the St Mungo's bog. And every other connection you've made between the movie and HP. You're so awesome!!

LMAO FAWKES. I love that hat XDD I can SOOO Totally see this. STILL! Except that it's still Hermione with a stuffed bag of books, with Hoggle's voice coming out of her mouth...

I can't breathe for laughing over the exchange between Fawkes and Dumbledore!! O_O Harry gave up his WAND?

WOW. I loved this chapter. And I'm so happy you know the Last Unicorn!! I think I watched it on TV a LOOOONG time ago, then randomly came across it in the movie store. I have it on VHS, but I need to upgrade to DVD. I know every line by rote. Seriously. XD Same with The Flight of Dragons. I saw it a LOOOOOOOOONG time ago, and then could never remember what it was called, until like my... freshman year? and then I was talking to one of my friends about it (the only thing I could remember was the green dragon, and the voice that calls out, "Caaarroliiinus...") And she was like, "That's the flight of dragons!" and I was like, "OMGREALLY?!"

You Should TOOOOOTALLY watch The Dark Crystal! It's FRIGGING AWESOME. I need to ... *ideas start forming* I need to watch it, and write a not-crossover like this one. I'll look on YouTube, like for what you did with the Labyrinth. :3 Keep an eye out for it, yeah? ^_________^

PS XD My guess for the junkyard is... ... ... *consults brain* Brain says the forbidden forest, but I also thought of the Room of Requirement in Hogwarts, and knockturn Alley. And I can't read and find out until you upload it! Hurry!
person sunset20
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're so fast, I can hardly keep up with you - I'm not complaining, mind you! :D
Anyway, what I wanted to say was YOU BASTARD!!! GET YOUR FILTHY HANDS OFF MY... errr... HARRY'S... errr... OUR DRACO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's ok, muffin, Harry will be there soon, don't you worry. *hugs Draco*
No, don't cry, Draco, wait I'll tell you a hilarious joke, ok? Hermione said she couldn't be right all the time and closed the cupboard-door. *Draco smiles a bit* Yes, I knew you would like that, muffin. *giggles and strokes Draco's silky blond hair - I've always wanted to do that* :D
person Danine
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i ill giv ou a much b ugh, m kboad is bokn!!!!!!!
person Danine
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about my last review, my keyboard must have been thirsty because my son poured a glass of water in it. I wasn't aware of that until I went to type out the review and it stopped working mid sentence. I flipped it over and *woosh*.... Anyhow, this is so fun to read, it reminds me of Alice in Wonderland! It's so fun and strange, like you don't know what's coming and the things everyone says makes you go "Hmm?!" I cannot wait for the next installment, keep em coming!
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 8!