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Uh oh, the love triangle was bound to come unstuck somewhere, wasn't it? How are they going to sort this little tangle out, I wonder?

I really enjoyed the lemon in chapter five as well. Hope you update soon.

Ooh, how did I miss this? I like it; very hot, and then when it turned out she was with Remus I went 'Ohmigosh!'

I think you're absolutely right that Severus and Remus would never share so much as a quill, let alone a lover. I like the direction this is going in though, even if I can't imagine what might happen next. Snape is very sexy in this; nice work!

NICE! I like this. Definitely loved how we were able to read through Snape's POV. Love it love it love it! Please update.

Have them in a threesome

So basically she KNOWS the trio is lying, regardlessly butts in on another professor dispensing discipline, undermines his authority publicly (instead of confronting him in private like a mature and remotely professional person, or giving back points later under other pretenses) and makes him a laughing stock in front of said students? I guess Severus isn't the one here who needs to grow up!

Hmmmm....I liked the first chapter it was really good. I liked the randomness of it and then liked the 2nd one. Question is are you wanting to make them a threesome? (Please say no) I always like Snape with OFCharacters. That's always my favorite. You can always show it from Snape's point of view on the day they had sex and show what he was thinking and what he thinks of her. Make it a little more awkward between those two. If you want me to be more specific let me know! I was really looking forward to reading your updated story but I guess the best of us get stumped on stuff like this.

can anyone say threesome!? *nudge nudge wink wink* =D

Another chapter of Laurentia with Snape. He threatens to expose their previous tryst, she pretends Remus doesn't know so that she can have another go with Severus. She can reveal the truth to him after she's had him, just to get back at him. Next, maybe some kind of lust potion mix-up, resulting in a threesome?

I've never written a fan-fic, I'm just winging it. Good luck!

well that was wild, Remus and Severus should trade secrets obviously they are well educated in the bedroom.

Holy crap! that was amazing! I looooove the dynamics of the two couples. I cannot wait for another chapter.