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Oh, yeah

Ugh. How vulgar little Riddle may be.... ech. I did enjoy the riddle that the knocker spoke and the answer Voldemort gave. That was good, came out of your head eh? Not bad, not bad at all. *grins* Gave me a smile anyway.

Hm. The chapters became so much more solid up to the end yet the conclusion seemed almost, lacking somehow. Perhaps it was too brief on the subject of his father. The erotic aspect was rather descript and rightly so but I'm afraid the young Riddle just isn't that amusing ...personally. With the senior Voldemort, there's just so much more to work with. I suppose I can't fully appreciate it since I am rather biased when it comes to the choice of younger Riddle versus elder Voldemort...obviously being more disposed towards the elder*shrugs*. The magpie referance was fairly canon, with the little objects and such.

Yeah, I know I didn

I think you need to do more explaining on the subject of Celeste's supposed betrayal of her friends, as you did not make it particularly clear. The beginning of this chapter seems for lack of a better word, 'blah' to me. I did like your description about the red caps. Celeste isn't a very interesting character, but I suppose I just enjoy reading about flawed characters, hence my fancy for the darker fics. Plus I can see she is supposed to be esentially innocent and a regular sort of person therefore not as intruiging.

I know when you wrote that he would 'get his revenge'' but not on the persons you would think', he is going to do something horrible to Celeste. Typical, using others as a vessel to divert his own pain and humiliation to distract himself from the severity of what happened. Denial is an amusing mask, especially when worn by Voldemort.

You know.... you do write his character very well, it is too often I find that people write him more as a 'misunderstood sort' or they try to make him more identifyable, attempting to humanize him.

Ah ha! That's the Riddle I know.... delighting in the physical torment of others. You can't help but feel terrible for Dumbledore, as he was trying to apologize, but it would be like Riddle to not understand such a thing. I'm beginning to worry for Celeste though, as I fear he has something truely awful in mind for her . . . .
That's what I enjoy about your stories, they are instilled with euphoric drops of twisted realism that rings true.
And the fact that you don't censor! ^-^

ugh you certainly don't feel sympathetic for him in this end >.o . . Deranged psycho.... toting around some sick ass book concerning dismemberment... God that kid is beyond need of therapy, the only hope for him would lie perhaps in a labatomy, but that would be like extracting the teeth from a shark wouldn't it.... :P I'm surprised Celeste isn't more privy to common sense and all the little alarms that Riddle's actions would be setting off in one's head .....

<"You are not to call me Tom anymore,

*snorts* Amusing, it's true that when one thinks of Tom Riddle they don't usually imagine him being punished.... >3 although wouldn't it be entertaining if it were Snape doing the punishing ((not to Riddle but to voldemort, as sort of a random parody >3 XD)) Hmm perhaps I will write a fic of it methinks... *scratches chin*