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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story, not at all... however, you do have on quite a few ocations errors where you have changed up facts in your story... example after the scene with Magonagle harry takes off his cloths before losing his cool and then when Snape finds him he's wearing them again... I mean there things that are can easily be fixed in a revising... but there are more then the one i mentioned. again i like how this story is coming along and hope to read more.
KCK-Lumcer
KCK-Lumcer
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January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was still wondering if you planned on continuing with this story?
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn I love your writing style you have great stories so far I hope you are still writing them.
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this story is amazing! Please send me an email at raineynight713@gmail.com whenever you update! Hope you update soon! =D
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story!
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is surprisingly good hope to see an update soon.
KP
KP
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just found this story. i love it. i am a huge snape/harry fan please update sooooon. please im dying here. you wont leave me to die will you (sniffles and gives puppy dog eyes) please say you wont let me die
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderfull story, please update soon
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Continue this story!!!! It is very interesting and I appreciate how you make Harry strong and deceptive, unlike all the whimpy roles I have been reading recently.
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story so far. >D Harry is super-powerful! Mwahaha...-coughs.- >>; Can't wait to read more!! =]