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its really hard to imagine harry as anything but a great dad

CH. 34- Lucius screamed in terror. I do not know why that one line has had me laughing and giggling for the last half hour. It was just too funny in that situation and so out of character for him. Nicely done.

poor thing. he just gets stuck in stickier problems each time the pass by

Oh yea another chapter! I love this story. Poor Lucius, my dear sweet evil Lucius. Arm sized cock huh? Can Alabaster rescue him some how? OOh i know have her 'be in the neighborhood.' He can hate her, that's fine, just darnit he's hot even if he is an ass.

NO I know I have arthur and he's a prize peach... well I have whoever I want, but the alabaster in your story has arthur :D

Anywhoo, i'll just day dream of finding lucius all bound and gagged and he does need to be gagged lol...but not with that arm....thing. Then in will sweep Arianna (My other other personality) and she will whisk him away to her humble (Read very rich witch) abode, and nurse him back to health. :D Yep that's what i'm thinking anyway.

Hurry hurry ....

ps-Boatwreck

What is it with you, that you keep me guffawing everytime I read
a new chapter?
The piece on the Malfoy marriage was just brilliant.
Keep it coming, hun.
I am just dying to find out what happens next.
By the way....way to go on Lucius' abduction.
He is now the toy of Grawp.
Wonderful and it serves him right.
Even though he still is one sexy bastard!

Well chelleybelle
bloody hell was a good title for the last chapter - I like the friendship developing between Draco and Harry (poor boy) I must say I don't have much sympathy for Lucius but ending up as Gwarp's sex toy eeewww
as for Ron and Luna - he has to find out at some time what she has been doing and I imagine it being quite an explosion on Ron's part but Luna who knows how she will defend her actions
can't wait for the next installment
kikiread

Hi chelleybelle
here's my second attempt to review - didn't want to go through the first time!! think I'll copy it first before sending it
Love the story - haven't been able to take time to read for a week or so and was glad to have a few chapters to catch up on - nice visual you set up on the reception - Draco in a nappy - and Harry in fishnets - haha
and Lucius taken away by Gwarp - Rose Parkinson sure knows how to get revenge - oh my - I hope Draco gives Katie a belated wedding night to remember he really owes her - will Felicia ever own up to her little addition of an aphrodisiac to Harry's hangover potion?
can't wait to see what happens next -
kikiread
now hopefully this will go through without an ugly error page coming up -fingers crossed before I hit the review button and I remembered to copy the review just in case!!

I am not sure if I should feel sorry for our magnificient caracters or laughing my harth out:-) I am almost shamefull to say that I feel a tiny, very tiny, bit sorry for Lucius. It's one hell of a predicament he is gotten into, but then again he is not a very nice person. Draco and Harry as friends are brilliant, you should stick to that. I feel sorry for Harry too, I think Felicia would be great for him, but things are happening very fast and not in the best way to start a relationship. If he ever finds out that Felicia slipped him a potion he migth feel more than a little betrayed if you consider Ginny tricked him with the false pregnacy. At the same time, the Weasley has as Arthur says always consider Harry as family, and even if Ginny tricked him it is hard to face that he is already marrying another woman.
Your story is going great though, I look forward to see what tricks you have upon your sleeve for the next chapter.

OH boy oh boy oh boy! Another three chapters! I think I'm in love with this story! DO I think that Alabaster and Arthur should get together, yes. They should have a stunning wedding with Alabaster in Alabaster of course :D and then they should have teh shock of the century.. She should get pregnant. They aren't THAT old in wizarding years ya know. :D And they should have.. wait for it..... not yet.... not yet.... Fraternal Triplets! One should have brown hair! one with Red! and one with blonde! LOL. They could name them Blinkin, Winkin, and NOd for all I care, but they would be lil hellions for sure. lol.

Also. I think that Lucius should be left for dead after Grawp is done with him and a wonderful caring kind mixed blood witch should find him broken and bloodied. She will take him to her large ancestral home (The side that was wizard was very well to do) and she should take care of him, back to health. He should have amnesia. And he will fall madly in love with the half blood. Imagine the possibilities.

I still want Ron to go on the boatwreck lol. But first I want more Luna/ron.... I think she should wallop him one though. :D Write more and in a hurry girl, you always make my day!

I think Arthur should be friends with her and then move on. It might be a little fast if he gets with someone so soon after his wife of so many years dies. I don