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for Pranksters In Love

by chelleybelle

schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is brilliant! Absolutely Brilliant! I keep checking the latest to see if this story has been updated yet. George has always been the 'saner' of the two twins in my mind as well, he is a trip and the two of them together are nearly inseperable, and they BOTH get into much trouble. I love that Hermione began to doubt herself and went to the Burrow to find if perhaps he'd lost interest. I love that I can see just how frightened Hermione would be to be pulled onto a broom and whisked off towards destination unknown... I especially love how he stepped into being a fiance with a girl he'd only ever fantasized about.

Now about that boatwreck... I can't wait to see how you kill off the certain members of the wedding parties... I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it's up soon. :D

I do believe I should write a Gred/Forge fic as well... I just dont know if I can write an adult one. It would probably just be a comedy. :D
person kittycat30
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pick up the pace please! I think the pairings could be very interesting... Fred needs to just spank Pansy and be done with it. She obviously is a spoiled brat and needs some discipline :) Huh, maybe George does too... or maybe Hermione needs to learn how to have some fun??? Which ever, just update soon!!!
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So.... you want to put Harry with Luna??? I like most of your couples... I really hope there's mention of what happens in the Malfoy-Bell marraige. Sometimes it seems you're moving slow, but you would kind of have to to go from Hermione having no feeling to being in love. It doesnt just happen overnight.
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh That's just cruel! Leaving it like that is so mean. But I'll be here tomorrow to see what happens so I guess that's what you want. Lol. Can't wait.
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Fred. But I can't wait to see what they do to her.
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
While I still think that my moaning myrtle idea was great.. (tee hee) (i love twinstories) I think that putting him with pansy was just ACK! How about we write in a character named Alastina (or Elastica or hell i dont care) and plop her down with Fred Or we could just have a freak boating accident off the coast of Zimbawbwe and kill draco and pansy

WOOT!
person Rosamund
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I knew he would do that ;) What will happen between Fred and Pansy? Yikes! What will Hermione think when/if she finds out? This will be fun!
person Rosamund
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is fun! Please keep posting! I want to read about the drawings...and how they'll get their names together. Or will it be fate? Whatever...just please post soon!
person jetuke
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story seems great. I love the calm, but filled with pranks George. Can't wait to read more. Please UPDATE soon. You rule!
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh quick.. lets have another chapter! :D I think the pairs should be like Ron and Pansy parkinson... Hermione and George. Draco and Susan Bones, Justin Finch-fetchly and Moaning Myrtle... hey this is a twin fic.. it could have something crazy happen. He could even say "Good lord, the ministry is really lacking, I'm not even with a living woman!" Fred could be with Luna. I think that perhaps he could deal with her... but I'd rather see Fred with someone like Tonks (who would be included in the marriage law)... Granted Tonks loves Remus, but Remus is a bit old to be included, and unless you marry them off quickly she's able...

Or you could put someone like Colin Creevy with Gabriel (fleur's sister) If you would like to go so indepth as to pair off Percy with someone, perhaps you should pair him off with Umbridge's neice who is the epitome of evil just as her aunt is. It would be fitting really...

There ya go :D have fun :D