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for Pranksters In Love

by chelleybelle

schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a really good chapter and I can't wait to read the next one. I understand what you mean about starting a new fic when you have one unfinished.
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the remembering! it was great! You could have told about that one time when Molly snuck out of hogwarts to meet Mr. Tall Dark and Dreamy, and got caught by Headmaster Dippet on her way out of the school. That was not the interesting part, the best part is that, when Dippet caught her, he caught her upside down with her bloomers showing, as she fell down a set of stairs head first. If he hadn't sent a spell out when he did, there might be no weasley children. IT was then that she decided that she preferred the safer (if not less sane) man of Arthur Weasley, besides If she were being honest with herself, he was quite good looking.

I Love reminiscing stories :D I loved the comedy intermixed with the grief. I think you could do a few more sad chapters before moving on, but it is your story, and i love the comedy as well :D I hope George and Hermi finally get to "Get it on"
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was nice of Draco to want to give his condolences. And lol to Arthur wondering if Luna had a mental defect that could pass on to her kids. I really like how it's going.

Thank you for the review on my new fic. I'm gonna try to put up a chapter a day but we'll see how that goes.

Can't wait to read more.
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im happy for draco and katie. im likeing pansy a bit more, but im sure thats on purpose.
person Kay_Rage
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hook harry up with...well i dont know..arent everybody else taken? how about romilda. and i know im funny. lol.thank god molly is dead.
person Leria
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Ginny lied to Harry about the baby? Not a surprise to me, I have seen a LOT of women lie to 'their man' about that and it ALWAYS comes back to bite them on the ass sooner or later.
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and hopefully this otion only works where it concerns luna, because if he doesnt take the news kinda hard, then people woud be suspicious. that would be nice for hermione and pansy to get lanog and in very very happy that harry learned the truth before ginny died. it will at least take off some of the grieving and eventually maybe make him angry, but who knows. after all, hes always wanted his own family. so, i guess that means that harry needs someone else to marry now, huh? or since he was already married does it not matter anymore? (though i doubt it)
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still love it. I understand that it would be hard to write about a grieving mother and it works so well. Harry escaped the marriage law thing but there still has to be someone out there for him... I'm sure you will find someone and it will work out.
person kittycat30
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not missing Ginny & Molly. They are not my favorites, so you're ok w/ me :) I'm loving the story so far! Um, Harry & Lucius maybe? Whatever, I trust your writing & I'm not that creative w/ suggestions right now anyway. Ready for more!
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why oh Why do I get the feeling that ron will respond with "Oh no, Mom's dead? Well that's ok, because I have such a wonderful and amazing wife. Luna is the most beautiful woman on the planet, and as long as I have her, everything will be ok?" lol. Great chapter, it was emotional. I guess the question is does Harry tell them that she wasn't pregnant? It may help their pain, or add to it. The fact that she lied to them all before her death could worsen the blow, but to know that an innocent fetus wasn't harmed could help.. Oh the delimma! I really do enjoy your story so very much. :D Keep it up. Ooh if you ever want to email me I'm alabasterhsadow[at]gmail.com