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for Empty souls

by elenapotter

schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I tried to email you but it sent it back saying that you didn't have an email account under that name. Let me know if you have another one.
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your fic but it would be better if you had a beta. Changing some of the grammar and spelling would make it easier to read. I like the plot though. Let me know if you are interested in a beta.
person jhaymar
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is OK but damn your spelling and grammar are terrible. A simple spellchecker would make your stories so much easier to read...
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was sad .. but how did that happen and how will they act when mione comes back .. please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ...will they find her and will she tell them why she left.. please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel