rate_review Reviews

interesting.

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Hermione is having Ron's baby? She should abort the pregnancy with this monster. Let Harry puncture her abdomen with a filthy needle. That should get rid of the little bugger. That Ron got Hermione's virginity is making me sick too. What a piece of shit.

The admins should have a better way to weed out the children on this site. I can't believe the immaturity!!

Don't listen the reviews you've been getting. If someone doesn't like your story, then they don't have to read it, right? You're doing a fine job. Keep it up :)

wow those last chapters made me so sad I got a little watery I admit

awww..you had me crying! what a sad chapter...but apparantly a good one if it gets people crying, right? ;) can't wait for the next chapter

I like this story alot so far I hope they find a cure though

well you paired ron and hermione together so i don't think you have any right to say anything about that fact that she put them together. This story is good except on the part of harry, he seems to weak willed and cowardly. Seriously every story i read now is hermione is gone and harry wants to find her or do something but instead just sits back and does nothing until someone else tells him to. Yeah Harry having no sense of direction or independance is a bit repetitve at this point. Plus i have a feeling that this is going to be so forced with more unnecessary angst and drama it's going to kill the story. So in conclusion i honestly say i don't like this story, i relly tried to but i can't like it it just isn't good the way you forced situations and made hermione so weak and harry so dependant on anyone.

its rons baby! ewe! i thought it was harrys

its definately an interesting storyline, but you really really need to work on the grammar and such