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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! what more please.
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
riddick, logan and harry all together can't wait
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story, I love it
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so fucking hot! I cannot wait for you to update. Oh god, so hot. Harry is so sexy and innocent and Riddick and Logan sharing him as a mate.... *pants and whines for more* Love this so much!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
too HOT!!!!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very, very, very good!
The sex scene was animalistic and truly passionate, very Riddick like.
Liked the fact that there is an explanation for their sudden sexual behavior, nice way to work it. It was worth the wait, hope you don
The sex scene was animalistic and truly passionate, very Riddick like.
Liked the fact that there is an explanation for their sudden sexual behavior, nice way to work it. It was worth the wait, hope you don
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brava!! i have been waiting for this chapter... ...now i would love to Beta for you but i don't know.. so far.. there hasn't been to many mis-spellings that i could have seen.. and verb usage is good...*shrugs* i love your chapters..they are long.. as how they suppose to be *grins* anyways... keep up the good work.. but if you still need a willing BETA feel free to email to give me an interview ^_^ ja ne
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was hot! Riddick and Logan are some of my favorite men to have ever been brought into existance. I think this pair with Harry is beyond hot. I like the way this store is going and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. There was some grammer errors that could be fixed, but other then that it was very well written. If you want I can beta for you since you stated that you don't have one.
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my, that was awesome!! what a cliffhanger though...i can't wait for the next chapter! seriously...
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story! You have a good writing style
I like your ideas so far very much and i really want to know if they will get together and whats so special in this story about harry!
*gives cookie*
P.S.: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE.
And sorry, if i spelled anything wrong. My english isnt as good as i would wish it to be.
I like your ideas so far very much and i really want to know if they will get together and whats so special in this story about harry!
*gives cookie*
P.S.: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE.
And sorry, if i spelled anything wrong. My english isnt as good as i would wish it to be.