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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aw, man this fic had such a good start but now you had to add the yyh plot which I think is just to much sentient magic and japanese speaking luna is also too much...I can see Luna speaking japanese but I don't think she would do so to Harry (an ENGLISH school friend...it's bloody in england not fucking) or Logan (american).
I'm not sure if I want to go on reading this twist are nice and dandy but sometimes it's just to much.
why not take the necros? you have riddick so why not them? I would think that more plausible than yyh, even if harry is chimera which doesn't seem to be much plot wise, otherwise the talk with koenma would be important.
or the evil people from x- men. I think you can get enough plot twists from those universes (Riddic, x- men) you had, except for if harry has another mate.
GW
I'm not sure if I want to go on reading this twist are nice and dandy but sometimes it's just to much.
why not take the necros? you have riddick so why not them? I would think that more plausible than yyh, even if harry is chimera which doesn't seem to be much plot wise, otherwise the talk with koenma would be important.
or the evil people from x- men. I think you can get enough plot twists from those universes (Riddic, x- men) you had, except for if harry has another mate.
GW
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME STORY... I totally LOVE it... The pairing is good... ^_^ PLEASE update soon, ne... ^_^
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you continue this story because it is amazing and i just reread it for the 4 time and i am totally looking forward for more.
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really really like your story but there is a problem with it, it's slight and it has nothing to do with you writing abilities, it's just too many explination....i can't spell...gave me a head ache so i'll have to read the last three chapters later.
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, the sex was great. Very fucking hot. And there was lots of it. Did I mention it was hot? But that last little bit with Luna really made that update great. XD That's just too funny and very good advice.
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Worth the wait! Update soon! :)
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! This soooo hot!!!!!!!
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wooow! Totally freakin' hot! I love this stufff.... <3
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I have read your story and I have to say it is great how you strung three different things together. I definitely want to read more, and any other fanfics you might write in the future. Just to note, I think it would be very amusing if Harry ends up pregnant. I can just imagine Logan and Riddick running around, trying to figure out how to take care of a kid. XD Anyways, please update soon.
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story, hope u update soon, can u e-mail me if u do :) coobs2@hotmail.com