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by astsweetheart18

person Kylie
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Regarding your second author's note...

YES, you absolutely should continue this story, when you get things sorted out in your personal life. Sometimes writing is the best relief for stress.

Sorry to hear about the death in your family :(
person Lady Minstrel
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please try to continue the story. I would love to read more.
person firelily
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story please continue it.
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, with everyting that has occured since book 7 we need our Severus fix.
person loveeyourhatee
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i defeintly think you should continue this story..
though i understand if you can't becuase life does sometimes get in the way!!
person snapeaddiction
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and think you should continue!!! So few interesting, new ideas with most stories. This is really original. I give it an enthusiastic thumbs up!!!
person Kylie
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.....that's all I can really say right now.

This story really hit me emotionally, as someone who has been dealing with self injury for years.

Good story so far, but it seems a bit hurried and short. I'd love to see you take your time, develop the story slowly, and make this into a long story, perhaps 20+ chapters or so. Issues like self-injury are too deep and complex for a short story.

Excellent start :D Two thumbs up!
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!

I can't wait to see where this is going. When may we expect an up-date?
person magical heather
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG these poor souls. I like how you stay in one pov for an entire chapter. Cant wait to read more
person Anon
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?