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for Core Pursuit

by GryffindorToy

person kunitsu
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is just great. I love this as much at the prequel already. That new proffesor is defenitely bad news and how could you leave an evil cliffy like that *pouts*

Update again soon
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Throws a couple of carrots around*
that should do it.. now write! xD
person Hope-Lynn
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I really like the plot line of this! creature fics aren't always my cup of tea, but this one is great! I really want to know what happenes next!
person blackdeath6
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what do bunnies like to eat besides carrots? i have chocolate i can give them. anywho, i bet anything that the dada prof. had something to do with that or someone in slytherin. appearantly, the prof. doesnt like harry that much with teh way he questioned his friends. cant wait for the next chapter. i hope dean and seamus dont die. teh wholeincident begs the question: why did they eat harrys chocolate in the first place without his permission?
person qwerty
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So dramatic! I really love this story.
You probably mentioned this before but... Why can Draco go back to school when everyone knows that he fled with Severus and Severus can't? I know the Ministry privately acquitted both of them but that would mean that everyone else still thinks that Draco and Severus had a hand in Dumbledore's death. What gives?
update
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*scream* Did you have to cut it off there!!! Wonderful story, can I smack you now?

Till you update again toodle-loo.
person poohbear74
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought that latent was it but you surprised me and made up a sequel, that is coming a long very good and well thought out.
person Nikte
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person arien calen
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! i really think your work here needs to be finished as soon as it can be done. i absolutely love the ways in which the characters seem to have grown.! especially in the personality of Snape^^
person InuEnki
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read all of Latent and this first chapter --- please continue! This is a great series and I can't wait for more. Thanks!