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for Core Pursuit

by GryffindorToy

person Allaye Riddle
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be cool to mix the two together. but thats just me ^.^. Also I heart this story so much. Draco is a little bit crazy in this, but I love how Sev is acting and everything. So much cuteness!
person landra
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and am frustrated every time I have to wait for the next chapter!!!
My vote is against including the Deathly Hallows in the story because I think they don't fit with your story so far(as I don't know where you're heading with this ff).
But either way you decide in the end I will remain a devoted reader and fan of your work.
person jackie
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story but you need more snape in it. If you can get him back in hogwarts I think this story will be just as popular as part one. The fun is seeing Harry and Snape together and what happens. I would love to see Snape in class trying to hide his affection for Harry. I think that would be greatness. These are your plot bunnies but I am enjoying the story so far.


person Anon
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no DH
person usmcgal
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i absolutley love your fics, i cant get enough. it completes my day -hugs you-
person kunitsu
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow those two updates was just nice. It always amuses me when the Prophet publishes stories that are so far from the truth and I love how sweet Severus is to Harry. Ooooooooh the Snarry smex is up next, I am looking forward to it

Update again soon
person Dark Disaster
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loooooove this story! Keep up the good work.
person jesssica morrow
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more!!!!!!!!!!
i want more!!!!!!!!
please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like it
*feeds plotbunnies*
go make me some more xD
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have noticed that throughout each chapter you manage to get stronger and stronger with your writing. The only one thing that bothered me is Sev just doesn't seem to be himself I guess I like him more on the strict side. Call me ol' fashion but I love my Alan tall dark inhumanly hawt and dominating as all get out. Oh and Harry is a little to ... Fluffy? lol. I love the new Draco and I love all the other characters although Ron seems a lil more grown up but it is going smoothly. You have a reader with me! Good luck and update soon.