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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! I have to say that I love Harry/Severus most of all. I am really enjoying this and I am looking forward to reading more. I kinda of like Draco/Ginny, since I think she is one of the only girls that can bully him into what she wants him to do. I really hope that you update this soon!
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I finally found this, glad I did. I enjoyed the first story and was unaware this was up.
I'm enjoying this one so far, just keep up the good work.
On whether or not you should include 'the Deathly Hallows' to your story; I think not. While adding the Horcruxes helps with the overall difficulty of offing old snake-faced Moldyshorts, try to keep your plotline original to your work. That way it stays your story and not just a creative retelling of Rowlings' story. Just my opinion, of course, but it would keep your task of telling your tale easier. If you want to add something, make something up...be as original as you can. Makes a story more memorable, and more yours in spite of it being 'fanfiction'.
Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
I'm enjoying this one so far, just keep up the good work.
On whether or not you should include 'the Deathly Hallows' to your story; I think not. While adding the Horcruxes helps with the overall difficulty of offing old snake-faced Moldyshorts, try to keep your plotline original to your work. That way it stays your story and not just a creative retelling of Rowlings' story. Just my opinion, of course, but it would keep your task of telling your tale easier. If you want to add something, make something up...be as original as you can. Makes a story more memorable, and more yours in spite of it being 'fanfiction'.
Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it! if poss, can u e-mail me wen u update again? my e-mail address is kissagram_22@hotmail.com
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please finish the story soon! It's too good not to be finished!!!!!
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I DEMAND more! *sweet innocent look* or there will be dire consequences.
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, that was great. i loved it. was wondering though, if you'd work on "Broken Glass" again, 'cause i really liked where that story was going. just a suggestion. can't wait to see your next chapter of this fic. good luck.
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fuck that was intense. lol. Loving the stroy. Can't wait to see what is instore for the next chapters. Update soon please.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW that was amazingly hot. I liked the contrast you made when they made love and when they fucked. Their love making was sweet and sensualy while thier fucking was fast and hard. A truly wonderful update
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More Please... Its getting very good
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am enjoying the story. i find it interesting how everyone is thinking the worst of Harry. i have a funny feeling that there is nothing to do about Draco's interest when it comes to the feeding. I think Harry should tell Severus about his dream for it will have a major impact on their relationship, especially with Harry's insecurities. Please continue for I am hooked on this story and wish to find out what is happening.