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by ccino49

person Miepje
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*argh* Severus is such a sneaky bastard; slipping her that healing potion. But now I'm all worried about him anyway, and I hope Lou finds him soon and gets them all safely home. Great chapters! I wish I could shift like that ^^
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How dare you leave us here?!?!

Arggggg!

But go Lou! Damn anyone who says different! No one else would have been able to do HALF as good. They can't shape shift or melt. Stupid Order. (Though Snape is going to killllll them)
person pittwitch
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how Lou pays Snape back for that latest round of Heal All. What a rat! P.
person Miepje
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What's behind that door?! I hope all the information they found will help find all the remaining deatheaters soon. Great chapter, and (of course ^^) looking forward to more.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to find out what happens next!

((And as for the drawing- got a bit of drawing's block. I also had a question (and do not take insult by this) but I can't seem to find where Lou is described. And while I have a picture in my mind, I want to make quite clear it is the right one... long wavy golden blonde hair down to the middle of her back, thin but curvy, greenish blue eyes))
person misslala
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, lots of crazy stuff going on! Wonder what hides behind the small door? Is it a secret vault of some kind?
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This mansion sounds like total overkill in size, as does the children's house in the garden. 'I have because I can!'

Oh, umm, you might want to look up the word "effeminately" and maybe opt for "emphatically" instead. You wrote:
person ccino49
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ellie. Sky has the blonde hair, Lou's is dark like Sirius and just passed her shoulders. her eyes are dark brown too.
ccino
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has made me happy after reading a certain book which I hate. ;)
person misslala
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahah Lou got her "revenge". That is too funny. I am glad to see the academy hasn't broke Lou of her best qualities, lol Happy reading of DH! :)