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by ccino49

schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've always had more opinions than I knew what to do with, so I share. I should have a warning label - All opinions and/or suggestions offered herein are made only with the best of intentions, though often not humbly. [Smile, she says, it's a joke ... sort of.]

I agree about fantasy, anything goes. So why is it that the Weasley family have magic, and yet they are poor? Conjure something! If it's broken, wave your wand and fix it. What good does it do to have magic in a fantasy world if you can't use it to make your life easier!
person Miepje
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*yay* I love it when Lou kicks Death Eater ass like that! Loved the relief, love and tears afterwards too. And I'm glad that she told Severus exactly how she felt about that potion he slipped her. But that oath! *shakes head* Idiot indeed. *grin*
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh drats, another boo boo: You wrote - 'Albus some of our best members are being held there, Severus, Remus, Kingsley, Arthur and Charlie. We have no way of knowing if they are alive or
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um, forget that suggestion I made about taking Arthur out, but it still needs adjusted somehow.

All the M.O.M. has to do now, to keep all those prisoners IN Azkaban, is to tell them Lou is on guard outside. Whether or not she actually is doesn't matter, just the threat should be enough.
person Miepje
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*argh* Evil cliffie! I do hope Lou has a good plan, because it doesn't look very good at all! *argh again*
person lizziek
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ccino! It was great to come back to this story and find so many chapters waiting for me. Love the stuff in Finland, the country and the mythology are both fascinating. Love the biggest castle in the world as Lou's house, too, but man - these Nilson's require a lot of blood. Your imagination is so wonderful, with all the twists and turns this story takes. I can't wait for Lou to convince Severus to dress up with her. ;) As always, looking forward to more of Lou and Sev. (Does Hermione get to hook up with one of those royals, or what?)
person pittwitch
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil, vile, loathesome, evil, evil, evil, evil. Bah! You made my eye start twitching again! Pitt
person misslala
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah hell! That was evil! :) What the hell does Lpu have planned for Greyback!? She better tesr him limb from limb for what he did to Severus and is trying to do to her!!! I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! Such a cliffhanger!! Please update soon XD
person misslala
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, he really doesn't trust her at all! That's insane! Yeah, I'd say he was being a prat. The wands were cool. ;) Now it's been a long day, so I will close with my usual, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :P