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by ccino49

person Miepje
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved Lou's enthusiasm for flying and cooking (and Severus' enthusiasm for her cooking ^^), and Lou and Severus spending time together and having fun, laughing. It's good to see the snarky git like that sometimes *grin*
So Lou finaly meets Harry and friends and starts off with defending Severus ^^ And Harry is accepting but only sulkily. Too bad Lou can't hit anyone; Ron could use some.
Thank you for the great updates; loved reading them. Looking forward to see what will happen next! ~Miepje
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had several chapters to catch up on, that was quite an impressive display of uncontrolled magic. How is Severus going to get around the oath he took? I'll be waiting to see what is in her personal effects, and if the black unicorn hair comes into play later in the story. Still waiting for the Kreacher and Harry meeting.
Sansa
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was a tearjerking letter from her mum. Love the idea of Severus buying an ice-cream with a sparkler in. Still really enjoying this.
person Miepje
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All those misunderstandings; they really are from two different worlds, and it's not just the magic. I liked Severus buying her her wand for her birthday, and the clothes (and the ice cream of course ^^) too. Their mutual embarrassment about the lingerie made me snicker. ^^
That letter from Lou's mother really confirms her identity. And what's this moon of knowledge? Can't wait for more! ~Miepje
person Miepje
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lou; first the cuffs and now a collar. But that was a lot of magic to get used to having! All these new things; I can imagine it's a lot to take in. I do hope she keeps her feisty spirit through it all. I love reading it, keep it up! ~Miepje
person magpie79
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great so far, cant wait for more
xxx
person risatine
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I really hope you update soon cause i can't wait to read more.
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OKAY what's the deal with you and collars? LOL ... poor Lou, althoug she got ice cream with Snape. MMMMM.
person Apryl
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a feisty one this Lou is! Can't wait to see what is in that letter.
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far. Poor Lou - but soon she'll get hers won't she? :)