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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods; facing those Blaise and Draco sounded very hard, but she did good. It's good to see Lou's new attitude; making a fresh start for herself. And her scars are gone! That's wonderful.
So Lou and Severus are to be married? Wonder how she'll react to that!
Have fun! ~Miepje
So Lou and Severus are to be married? Wonder how she'll react to that!
Have fun! ~Miepje
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have fun!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved this last chapter.
Snape having to marry Lou- it's brilliant. It's like marriage law stories but it makes more since. yay.
And I love how she didn't understand Ron.
Snape having to marry Lou- it's brilliant. It's like marriage law stories but it makes more since. yay.
And I love how she didn't understand Ron.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is soooooo sad.
I have already looked for more chapters three times today.
I think I'm hooked.
I have already looked for more chapters three times today.
I think I'm hooked.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for more!
What a bastard Snape is being (oh no... I used a naughty word- can he smack me? lol) when it comes to Ron.
Love it, love how they both really like eachother- but they are being silly.
<3
Keep 'um coming!
What a bastard Snape is being (oh no... I used a naughty word- can he smack me? lol) when it comes to Ron.
Love it, love how they both really like eachother- but they are being silly.
<3
Keep 'um coming!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grin* Severus seems to be jealous of Ron and he doesn't even realise it. I'm glad Lou's leg is getting better. Let's hope it stays that way now! But poor Lou; suddenly remembering all that Blaise and Draco did to her. She's giving quite a lightshow!
More please?! ~Miepje
More please?! ~Miepje
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't WAIT for more!
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whew* I had lots of chapters to catch up with! :D
I loved Lou going to Hogwarts, making new friends, doing well in classes. Her troubles with Draco and Blaise and the rape made me really sad for her. I'm glad Hermione's such a good friend to her. Lou's developing feelings for Severus seem to be confusing her. Severus seems a bit confused as well. *grin*
And now she's going to the ball with Ron. I just hope they don't get too close, but then I'm not a big fan of Ron ^^
Looking forward to more and thanks for sharing! ~Miepje
I loved Lou going to Hogwarts, making new friends, doing well in classes. Her troubles with Draco and Blaise and the rape made me really sad for her. I'm glad Hermione's such a good friend to her. Lou's developing feelings for Severus seem to be confusing her. Severus seems a bit confused as well. *grin*
And now she's going to the ball with Ron. I just hope they don't get too close, but then I'm not a big fan of Ron ^^
Looking forward to more and thanks for sharing! ~Miepje
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SO... I'm on chapter 32 and I have not reviewed yet.
This is something I do not do... it's mean.
I feel the need to comment on this chapter because- finally a little bit of secual tenstion that I know was there- she is just a little young and so maybe I was hoping there wasn't any- and then I was again. Lol.
I really like your story. I LOVE how your transistion with Lou has been- from troubled kid to more of a teenager, most stories have horrible transitions where in one chapter a character acts one way- and in the next it's different.
I also love Snape in this story- it's interesting (as a Snape writter, someone who has an RP where my best friend is Snape, and someone who reads almost every Snape story I can get my hands on) how many different ways there are to play him. So yeah, love how he is in this one.
(This long review is to make up for the 31 chapters I didn't review, lol)
Can't wait to see what happens next!
This is something I do not do... it's mean.
I feel the need to comment on this chapter because- finally a little bit of secual tenstion that I know was there- she is just a little young and so maybe I was hoping there wasn't any- and then I was again. Lol.
I really like your story. I LOVE how your transistion with Lou has been- from troubled kid to more of a teenager, most stories have horrible transitions where in one chapter a character acts one way- and in the next it's different.
I also love Snape in this story- it's interesting (as a Snape writter, someone who has an RP where my best friend is Snape, and someone who reads almost every Snape story I can get my hands on) how many different ways there are to play him. So yeah, love how he is in this one.
(This long review is to make up for the 31 chapters I didn't review, lol)
Can't wait to see what happens next!
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh no, when is something good going to happen for Lou? great story though look forward to more soon