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Ron's not just a prat, he's cruel too! First he takes advantage of Lou being drunk and then he treats her like shit! I hope that's the end of Ron/Lou. (also because Ron-lemons squick me ^^) Tho I absolutely loved angry Hermione! And Severus certainly received some great gifts. ^^ Welcome back! ~Miepje

aww pooe Lou, dealing with all of the Weasley's at once! *sigh* That would be a feat for anyone I imagine. LOL Can't wait for more~

Wench

Great to have you back. I'm kind of fearful for Lou, though, having to get married so young. At least she likes the guy!

WELCOME HOME!!! Hope your holiday went well. (Thats called a vacation here in the states, you American gits! ;) JK) I don't know who to feel worse for, Lou or Charlie. I do think that Molly is gonna take it worse than Ron when it becomes known that Lou is with Severus. All that pampering will be hard to give up.

I am really enjoying your work! Hard to believe it is not beta'd. No grammar or syntax problems that I often struggle with in an un-beta'd story only the occasional typo, amazing! I especially like your OFC "Lou". From now on, whenever an OFC has extraordinary powers but is a fully formed, interesting, multidimensional character which I am thoroughly enjoying, I will think of her as a "Mary-Lou".;) Looking forward to the end of your holidays and more "Both Sides". KC

whew! I have just coasted through this tale and I LOVE it! You have a faithful fan, just so you know :P I am loving this story. Poor Ron when he finds out about the bonding. I am curious how Lou will take it since she already desires the Potion's Master.

This character is very cool, she has many faults, outside of her insecurity, which makes her very believeable. As far as Mary Sues go, I think it is truly up to the reader, because there is nothing wrong with applying yourself to a story sometimes. :) Not saying you are, just musing really.

I like the dynamic between Lou and Ron, for some reason it is nice to watch him get some action for a change, even if it isn't literal. Regardless of mistakes, you are a very good writer and I enjoy reading the tales you weave. You write so much and I envy your ability to pull out a story with so many details, yet so many at the same time. Each chapter is a work of art and I applaud your ability to craft a new piece each time.

I almost want to ask you to share your secret and help a fellow writer! LOL Anyway, i am done rambling, I love it and I can't wait to read more!

I love this story so much! It's my new favorite. It's so interesting, different, and just very canon... even though obviously it isn't, but it seems so. I really hope your holiday ends soon as it would seem you update often. I hope you do! Can't wait to read another chapter.

I'm such a sleepy fangirl. haha

Ahhh- I went from not posting at all to posting far to much and being really annoying like I am with my other fav stories...

Even though I know you arn't posting for a week... I am still checking and then remembering. It's so sad.


Can't wait for more!

Awwww a week? That's going to feel like eternity! Oh well, just wanted to say once again I love your story to bits! Though I admit, I'm gonna feel awfully bad for Ron when the marriage is revealed along with the collar. What can't that kid ever keep a girl?

I've really enjoyed reading your story. I look forward to to reading more. Have a safe and fun holiday.