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by ccino49

person misslala
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whew! this is getting crzy!
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg... this is getting so despressing! Like, I am close to tears when I read it and I usually like stories like this. Arg!
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Binding really sucks! Poor Lou. I don't blame her for trying to run away. Now what is he going to do to her? Couldn't he just give her some kind of potion or put her under the imperious so that she could be subservient and always obey for the 7 days? That behaviour only has to go on for the 7 days, right? Not forever? If it were me, and it was forever, I think I would be looking for a bridge to throw myself off of. Maybe they better think of putting that other cuff back on her.
Sansa
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god!

These chapters were so sad... I like my Snape mean... but he is so... I don't know. So nice one minute- and the next insane and curel. I wouldn't be able to deal with it either. Crazy.

Can't WAIT for more!
person KCGreen
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
still really enjoying this fic!
person risatine
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor lou, now i really feel bad for her. hope she gets away! update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
person Miepje
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved reading the naughty lemons, but the rest just made feel bad for Lou. I mean; I love Snape, but I hate what he does to her, even if it is for the right cause. She's scared enough to flinch, cower and run away (as I think I would too) and doesn't that weaken the binding instead of making it stronger? I kinda hope she can escape ^^
And I'm curious; how did Ron know she wasn't a virgin if she had her hymen again?

My gods, this story has me hooked even if some parts of it squick me. I can't wait to see what happens next. ~Miepje
person misslala
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lou and poor Severus!!!! That sucks that he is having to be such a bastard, but it is needed to placate the madman I guess. :/ That sucks but I look forward to more!!! :)
person Madietta
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Having read both stories you posted here makes me wonder about possible issues you may have. The practically neverending streak of abuse and violence hurled at your heroines, preferably from their loved ones, would probably make them end up in mental institutions in real life, yet they remain nice, cheerful and grateful at all times. Interesting.
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how you post more than one chapter at a time. I'm really into your story and hope Severus can pull this whole thing off. Poor Lou, she really is going through it. Lou is in big trouble now. I thought Lou would of relized that running off would cause the dark lord to kill Severus.