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Wait... so the binding is broken because she screamed at him? Maybe I read it to fast (I'll just have to read it again).

I like it! Still, and always!

More soon please!

Chapters 56-57 or is it 56 X 2 -- I've been reading this for the first time over the weekend and it took me a while to figure out what the big deal was about the two chapters. To quote Severus, "I see no difference." It took a third look to find what was pared down and that was after skimming the other reviews to try to figure out why there was more than one version of just two chapters.

MHO - Since the whole story is written about the horrible life this girl has had, is having; to suddenly leave out a bit of detail on a couple of chapters is completely unnecessary. I think you should pull the two revised chapters and just get on with it the way you intended. Maybe put warnings at the top of the pages for those who secretly want to read this kind of story [and those more graphic] but then become embarrassed by what they've read and end up blaming you for having written and published the story.

As someone else pointed out, this IS 'Adult'fanfistion! If someone doesn't care for the adult content of the stories on this website, they should try mugglenet.com.

BTW - Great story! Just watch your use of the words 'of' and 'off'. You're indiscriminate with them.

Ch 61/59 - I have no idea how often you update this story, but P L E A S E, write more soon. I've run out of chapters to read!

I have to tell you that I was very glad they took the calming cuffs off Lou. That was the only thing that REALLY bothered me about the story. Albus and Severus had taken away her will, her ability to comprehend, and then proceeded to slap her, 'spank' her and virtually rape her as punishment for what she had literally no means of understanding as wrong. The old man is just as culpable as Severus is in this issue, as he knew and allowed it.

I'm not asking for a rewrite to remove things I have a personal issue with [men hitting women]... LOL it would be justification if as Lou's 'guardian' that Albus would feel all her punishments! See if the old guy can take it.

Another great couple of chapters! Those binding ropes sure are clever.

Still wonderful. The binding is very interesting--- how he's not really given a choice in punishments. Almost makes it so that he isn't dominate either- the binding is dominant. Weird, but I like it.

Ah! More chapters so soon, yummy. Keep 'em coming... er... so to speak. Love, love, love the outrageous kinkiness of the binding. It even gives him implements - lol.

Good to see you hanging in there with this story, ccino.

Not too good a time for Lou right now. At least she was given a choice, so she can't place the blame of her tourture on anyone but herself. Well maybe Voldie. Those ropes are a nasty buisiness. I hope Lou can do what she needs to, so nothing nastier than the paddle appears. Too bad they took the cuffs off of her, it probably would have been much easier for her to be complient. I hope she can empty her mind, and this time will go very fast for her. Waiting to see how her freinds will react to the binding.
Sansa

I'm so glad cuffs went off, so that Lou feels like herself again. And that she made the decision to go through with the binding of her own free will (and sound mind).
Laughing at Severus is not a very smart thing (even if it's funny ^^). I wonder how the rest of the binding will go and how they'll deal with it.

Great update! ~Miepje

I sincerly hope you have not given up on telling Lou's story. You are a wonderful writer.