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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still wonderful but what made them start the heavy makeout session?
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLOL @ "Dumbeldore you old coot..." too funny, well at least there's an attraction. I see these two will be bumping heads. Love the story.
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay... i'm loving it!!!! it's nice and different... i know that u have some future love scenes comin up so i kinda wanted to suggest that u read " what a witch needs" by petalsoft... it's in the threesome/ moresomes section on the 2nd or 3rd page.... it's long like 65 chapters, but i believe that that all good writers (that would be u) should read a great piece of work/smut/ best damn story i've read in a long time... and see how others keep the whole love/sex/lust/damn good plot going without ever becoming redundant. not that ur writing is..... dangit... what i'm tryin to say,is that that is a darn good story and i think u would like it... the end! look forward to ur next update!!!
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hay i see you put i on here cool its me sailormoonfan1982
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! Add more xD
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay i have just read all three chapter and i have to say that i cant wait to see what you will do next!! this is a great story! i also love what sachel (sorry i think i spelled it wrong) did and i really cant wait to see how hermione reacts! ;) i do hope that this story is full of details (more so in future sex chapters) and that the story is really, really, really long-see i have a thing for long stories. hope that you will have a new chapter up for us soon! :)
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start, can't wait to see more!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this looks very interesting, I wonder how hermione and Snape will feel about this :)
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very clever;) I love ML stories ... even ones manipulated by house-elves. Curious to read what else you've come up in the story...
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2 - Hermione will be 18 years old [without Time Turner additions] as of September 19 in her 7th year at Hogwarts.