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for Nobody Tell

by GryffindorToy

person Anon
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Need MORE MORE MORE - great storyline - I can't wait to see if it continues!!!
person Lumcer
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay I nearly died laughing when I first realized if you changed Gold and silver to silver and gold instead of having G.A.S. you'd have S.A.G. LOL sorry but it's just too funny! Love the story! despite the fact that Harry seems to be crying in every chapter it doesn't feel like it's beeing over played. I love how Draco is so caring and gentel but still has his 'stupid' moments :D I like the Teddy Bear thing very dear. I hope there is more to this story in the coming :D :D :D

KCK-Lumcer
person Toddy
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What is wrong with a little angst and drama if it moves the story along and provides an insight into the character's feelings? I, for one enjoyed reading chapter 21.
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Pacing is good...I'm confused on the riddle though. Not sure who it could be.
person Ailish
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am loving the story, but I do have a question. Isn't Sev teaching DADA?? A couple of times in Ch. 15-18 you mention them having Potions homework from Sev. I just thought that I would ask. Keep up the great work.

Ailish
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, first off, just wanted to say i really like ur story, it's absolutely adorable. however, there is one small part that should be corrected. In chapter 19, you wrote 'Draco's head slammed down on the desk' or something, tho it's supposed to be 'hand'.
I hope you update really soon!!
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22 please!!!
person AnArkAngel
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. It's well written and has kept me hooked from the first chapter. Keep up the good work. And thanks for giving me something tinteresting to read while on kid watch. ~ark
person CAttwood
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool story!!! Looking forward to the next update!!

Whenever that is!!
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo can't wait for chapter 21!!!!!!!