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for Purrsuit

by GryffindorToy

person tash
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'll be the first to review. It's an odd story, but cute. Doesn't matter how improbable, obviously you're trying to have fun - and the story is fun! Can't wait for chapter 2. Good job with the ears and tail in relation to emotions.
person ridert
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very promising love the harry Neko idea but I really sometimes think people forget exactly how independant cats are
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A most interesting story and I can't wait to see how it develops. Excellent work!~Sophia
person kunitsu
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooooooowwwww that was amazing. I really love your idea a cute submissive kitty Harry for Severus ^_^

Keep up the good work and update soon
person Christalus
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! nice fic, I'm addicted! I hope you update soon ^^
person Selera
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh lovely a cat boy story.. in the best way to. *Grins* Get the next chapter up soon please.
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG please write more now i love it!!!
person Vittani
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooohhhhhhh i really really like this. You gotta update this.
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why must you not have more chapters!@!!!!!!!!!!!! I DEMAND more chapters! mwahahahahahA! do my bidding...okay, i'm done....still, please!
person serpentlady
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I quite liked your approach to NekoHarry. So far the story is entertaining and engaging, with the lime just vague enough for me to imagine what I want, but specific enough for you to get you point across. My only concern is how Harry got over the mistake so quickly, in what seems about five minutes. But over all, a very good start. If you are doing email updates, can you sign me up? Thanks, and happy plot bunnies.