rate_review Reviews

In this chapter you say voldermorte is alive but the chapter before this it comes off like he is already dead? So which is it? Good story by the way. Can't wait to read the rest.

Omg why the hell did you stop wright this is so good.

Wonderful absolutely wonderful!!! Heh poor Sev. He has his hands full now and damn you Draco learn to get a life!!! Wish for more :3

more please!!!!!! this is soooo hot hot hot!

Would love to read more, are you going to finish this? X

i love how just smelling Snape makes Harry purr! as far as the fic as a whole goes though, i think it progresses too fast. there are some passages that really seem like one scene skips to the next with little to no transition. i also think that some characters seem useless is this. like, i know that Seamus was suposed to act as a little extra fuel for Snapes jealousy, but i don't think he was active enough in the story to be mentioned. like, either have a character be an active participant in the plot's flow (like Malfoy was) or just don't mention them.
i know this seems really harsh, but i really did love the fic and its definitely getting a good rating. just wanted you to know how to improve on it ^^

awwwwwwwwwwwww they're just tooooo cute!!! can't wait for the nxt chappie. F&G r gunna be sooo proud.
in a way i feel bad 4 draco, tho he keeps accosting harrry, but he should get someone, eventually
anywhos great 4 chapters and can't wwait until the 5th
-Kyle

The CAT who got the... cream... =P bad pun

STILL WAITING! I'm nothing if not dedicated!
i will literally do anything if you update!
gah! please!

STILL WAITING! I'm nothing if not dedicated!
i will literally do anything if you update!
gah! please!