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Chapter 1 (one-shot): This was very affecting and sad. Now, my questions: I assume it was Lucius who killed his son and Hermione. Was it because Draco was a traitor? And I am confused. You said son and soul-mate. I've read that three ways: Hermione was Draco's soul-mate. Draco was Lucius' soul-mate (yeah, kinky, I know). Hermione was Lucius' soul-mate. I guess the first choice matches best, but it wasn't the first way I read the ending. I thought Lucius killed them because Hermione was Lucius' soul-mate.LOL

So who made Lucius relive his murdering his son over and over? Was it all in his mind? Did he bury his son and Hermione together with that tombstone?

Well, this tale was so hopeful and then so bittersweet and agonizing. Very nice writing, but I need a tissue now.

aww, how absolutely beautiful and yet very sad. Loved the grave marker though.

Thank you so very much for the review on UN. Yes, real life filters in through the fiction, it makes it better. Loved the last line as well, LOL! Right you are.

That was remarkably beautiful and sad! And oh so well written.

Ohh i loved it!! I can't believe he did that! But anyway, i still loved it

Jayna
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wah!!! so sad. I would love to read more, even if you just expanded upon this one shot. I love the fact that Snape saved the lives of first years since I am hopeful he's a good guy.