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I forgot to add (I do that a lot:P) that I was glad to see near the end the evidence that Harry is thinking more of what is right for him and what would truly make him happy, than of the correct and self-sacrificing thing that he 'should' do. After so many years of giving of himself to do what's best for others, he needs to start thinking of himself. And if Ginny's petty and just cruel ("He'd suffer but he wouldn't die, so it's fine :D") letter is what it took to really push him into doing that, then yay for Ginny.

Definitely good! Harry finally admitted he needs someone, he needs touch and he needs comfort. Not in the way that he usually allows, but...totally knowing that he is loved. Maybe a neglected childhood, a burdened teenage time and the lost of best friends, mentor, godfather and all other he cares...place himself at a constant distance from others - but I would like Harry to know, accepting that he is weak, he is being loved and cherished is nothing similar to failure/weak...

BTW, Pansy received her punishment, but I must dare ask - has Draco advanced too much? Though Pansy chose to watch 'it' herself, but something so pure and intimate may just put some senses into her mind again...

BTW2 - Ginny should not place herself into a passive position, if she ever wants Harry back, she should fight for them, but never accepts a position of retreating! Waiting is not the best option during a war! Though I must admit - how come Harry's partner care so much about Ginny? Or Harry?

Lastly, if it is not Nott Jr., then it must be Nott Sr...somehow I feel Daphne/Ernie (? the one who constantly travel now) is involved in it - to gain the ultimate position of Minister of Magic!

I really like this story. I can't help but to feel for all involved. On one hand I hope that Harry and Ginny can make things work (and normally I am not a Harry/Ginny fan). On the other hand it seems as if Draco will be better for Harry. First Draco was his typical spolied self, but slowly it seems as if he has come to really care for Harry, and in the last chapter they were so very sweet together. ..

This is definitely a story that I would stay up all night reading if it was finished.

That was beyond perfect! I sooo need chapter 8!

Hi!!!

Your fic is sooooooo wonderful!!!!
I love it, I have read a lot of veela-fics but yours is oustanding, the characters, the plot, everything.

Please keep writing.
DM

I loved this chapter. The book that Draco gave Harry made me want to cry, how sweet. The Veela is really taking good form. I read the author notes and thought two things:

1. Does Pansy really have to live? (just kidding)
2. I'm now going to have to pour over the books to figure out who the "mystery man" is.

Anyhow, just wanted to tell you that this story is incredible! Please update soon.

Oh god. I love your characterization of everyone...especially Harry's. I can't wait to see how Draco manages to fool Pansy and maybe even let her tell him where the pictures are.

ho!!! i love this fic? poor harry...he's in such dilemma. i like how you opt to make ginny a good character. it makes ur story more interesting and the character's struggle more real. especially our dear harry. i like it that u didnt take the easy way out n make ginny a bad person that shud be dumped. i x really like harry/ginny but here i like the way u make harry n draco getting together an effort for them. this fic is not just another fic..if u know what i mean. i really enjoy reading this. Keep up the good work!!

p/s: who's the bad man? it couldn't be snape could it?? or is it lucius malfoy??

I absolutely LOVE this story!!!! It's such an original twist on the H/D creature genre! Can't wait for the next chapter