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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It bothers me that every time both Harry and Draco thinks about fucking (I think it would be time of eventual and full claiming?), both of them automatically means that Harry should be bottom. It is on contrary to Draco's usual desire for Harry to think about his own needs and do what he wants. I supposed Draco wants them to be equal partners, since he was enjoying Harry as worthy contender in Quidditch and considered equal to him in all. Also, I always saw Harry, as protector, caregiver and leader, who was too much controlled and manipulated in his life to be agreed being ordered about or even be anything but equal in relationship. It was bugging me along all story, that Draco always takes leading role and seems be sure that he will be always a leading one, if (and now when) he and Harry will be together.
Now, in this chapter I was absolutely delighted to read phrase "absolute surrender for absolute surrender". That was that has calmed my discontent about Harry and Draco's situation and reconciled me with my reactions at few mention about boys, having a steady relationship.
I still angry about Draco constantly using his Veela power to get what he needs from Harry - and he IS taking advantage every time they have intercourse, but you can't see him not doing that, what with him being true Slytherin and all. More so, since he had promised Harry to not use his wings and claiming mark to make Harry be more obedient to him. And Harry finally explained that he needs to be on control of his own life and his choices. so there is hope, they both will get what they wants.
Although I still hope that they will manage to stay apart for year, and Veela in Draco will quit. Then they can chose to be together on equal ground and fully because they chosen each other, not because creature and nature did them.
I really want to see Harry finally doing a decision and taking some active role in their action with Draco, I'm becoming tired from his passivity. Take a lead already, Harry, for Merlin's sake! You're a man, not a some scared virgin! (Ok, you're virgin, but Draco also is, in that sense) :)
I also wanted to point that Ginny was SO wrong, then she deny Harry sex. Ok, they can't have full action, but please, both of them can give each other the satisfaction and pleasure, and more than that, by doing that both of them would return feeling of belonging to each other, to share something intimate, personal. Ginny, by denying Harry not only sex, but even some hugging also, shows that she doesn't care about his needs and desires, as she wants to show. Very stupid from her side.
Now, in this chapter I was absolutely delighted to read phrase "absolute surrender for absolute surrender". That was that has calmed my discontent about Harry and Draco's situation and reconciled me with my reactions at few mention about boys, having a steady relationship.
I still angry about Draco constantly using his Veela power to get what he needs from Harry - and he IS taking advantage every time they have intercourse, but you can't see him not doing that, what with him being true Slytherin and all. More so, since he had promised Harry to not use his wings and claiming mark to make Harry be more obedient to him. And Harry finally explained that he needs to be on control of his own life and his choices. so there is hope, they both will get what they wants.
Although I still hope that they will manage to stay apart for year, and Veela in Draco will quit. Then they can chose to be together on equal ground and fully because they chosen each other, not because creature and nature did them.
I really want to see Harry finally doing a decision and taking some active role in their action with Draco, I'm becoming tired from his passivity. Take a lead already, Harry, for Merlin's sake! You're a man, not a some scared virgin! (Ok, you're virgin, but Draco also is, in that sense) :)
I also wanted to point that Ginny was SO wrong, then she deny Harry sex. Ok, they can't have full action, but please, both of them can give each other the satisfaction and pleasure, and more than that, by doing that both of them would return feeling of belonging to each other, to share something intimate, personal. Ginny, by denying Harry not only sex, but even some hugging also, shows that she doesn't care about his needs and desires, as she wants to show. Very stupid from her side.
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think if Ginny really loved Harry she would back off and let him have this Happiness that she her self saw, and stop trying to interfere in their relationship. Please update soon. I love this story. ^__^
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Ginny needs a lesson on how to treat Harry. Draco is being so wonderful. I hope that Pansy gets whats coming to her. Great story, I'm so hooked.
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this Go Harry!!!It's good to see hm starting to go after what he needs even if it's slowly.
And Fleur Delacour just became my heroine in this one!
Seriously Ginny does not know Harry!
But I'm curious, did Fleur really tell her the things she mentioned in the letter about the veelas?And about the rest of the weasly's do they know about what's going on?
Also why do I get the feeling that Ginny only accepted that Harry tells Ralph about "it" to get some sympathy?
Anyway...this fic is amazing, but une and august are my favourite so far.
And is Remus dead like the Malfoys, cause if not, I think that it'll be goodd for Harry to have someone who genuinely cares for him and who could give him some kind of advice about hapiness.Orr that he will have a little talk with Fleur's husband(he sure kows not to resist a veela)!
And Fleur Delacour just became my heroine in this one!
Seriously Ginny does not know Harry!
But I'm curious, did Fleur really tell her the things she mentioned in the letter about the veelas?And about the rest of the weasly's do they know about what's going on?
Also why do I get the feeling that Ginny only accepted that Harry tells Ralph about "it" to get some sympathy?
Anyway...this fic is amazing, but une and august are my favourite so far.
And is Remus dead like the Malfoys, cause if not, I think that it'll be goodd for Harry to have someone who genuinely cares for him and who could give him some kind of advice about hapiness.Orr that he will have a little talk with Fleur's husband(he sure kows not to resist a veela)!
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 9! Maybe Ralph is the answer for Ginny! Fluer is on Draco's side! Thank goodness! I soooo gotta have more!
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Maa, maa...I've wanted to read this for quite sometime now, but I kept forgetting; I'm glad I finally did though. I love it! I really like how Draco and the Veela seem to be merging. I seriously cannot wait to see what Draco has in store for Pansy, and because you said that he won't kill her, I say bring on the public humiliation, she deserves it.
I think Ginny was justified in leaving Harry (even if its just temporary), it wasn't doing her or Harry any good, and it just put a strain on their relationship. I think Harry's idea of having the pensive only helped for a little while, but after that it only seemed to fuel her anger because she saw that Draco brought Harry to new heights of pleasure that she could never hope to achieve. *grins* I never imagined that I'd say something like that in all my life. Anyway...
I like the new kind and compassionate Draco; who doesn't just care about getting into Harry's pants, it
I think Ginny was justified in leaving Harry (even if its just temporary), it wasn't doing her or Harry any good, and it just put a strain on their relationship. I think Harry's idea of having the pensive only helped for a little while, but after that it only seemed to fuel her anger because she saw that Draco brought Harry to new heights of pleasure that she could never hope to achieve. *grins* I never imagined that I'd say something like that in all my life. Anyway...
I like the new kind and compassionate Draco; who doesn't just care about getting into Harry's pants, it
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi:
This is my first time reviewing this story. I had read it before but I didn't know how I felt about the whole triad of relationships. On the one hand I could see Ginny's pov and why she was justified. On the other Draco's. I think this chapter changed a lot of what I felt. AT first I liked Ginny and I still do because technically Harry was her husband. However, I think this story deals a lot with the theme of sacrifice and compassion. Ginny started with what she thought was a strong marriage, however, a marriage cannot be built on the happiness of only one. Harry sacrifices too much of himself for the happiness of others as was seen on the beginning chapters. But now we can see more of an equilibrium developing between Draco and Harry. I like that, not too say that Draco has completely changed. He's still a git but now he thinks about the feelings of his future partner. I also like how every character that has tried to manipulate a person in the name of love is getting it ^^. It is very easy to confuse love with selfishness.
This is my first time reviewing this story. I had read it before but I didn't know how I felt about the whole triad of relationships. On the one hand I could see Ginny's pov and why she was justified. On the other Draco's. I think this chapter changed a lot of what I felt. AT first I liked Ginny and I still do because technically Harry was her husband. However, I think this story deals a lot with the theme of sacrifice and compassion. Ginny started with what she thought was a strong marriage, however, a marriage cannot be built on the happiness of only one. Harry sacrifices too much of himself for the happiness of others as was seen on the beginning chapters. But now we can see more of an equilibrium developing between Draco and Harry. I like that, not too say that Draco has completely changed. He's still a git but now he thinks about the feelings of his future partner. I also like how every character that has tried to manipulate a person in the name of love is getting it ^^. It is very easy to confuse love with selfishness.
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see this update...yay!!! I hope Harry continues to go to Draco. Although, this wouldn't be a harry/draco fic. if he didn't, right? They seem so close now. I can't wait for the next update.
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know my first immediate thought at the beginning of this chapter after reading the first paragraph is that maybe Ginny should marry Ralph and just leave Harry in peace. But that was my bitchy side kicking in a bit before I calmed it down:) But anyways into the review, please excuse my bouncing around.
I liked this chapter. It felt like a turning point for Harry. Personally, I agree. He probably wouldn't say he's screwed up, but people who are screwed up never do. But I think that little game he was playing with the wizard who's trying to kill him is indicative of some kind of issues. But I'm glad Draco knows now. He can help him, I think he already has. I think that in that conversation with Harry, he pretty much said what I've been thinking all along. 'But I don
I liked this chapter. It felt like a turning point for Harry. Personally, I agree. He probably wouldn't say he's screwed up, but people who are screwed up never do. But I think that little game he was playing with the wizard who's trying to kill him is indicative of some kind of issues. But I'm glad Draco knows now. He can help him, I think he already has. I think that in that conversation with Harry, he pretty much said what I've been thinking all along. 'But I don
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I'm so glad to see the bond between Harry and Ginny is getting weaker, while the bond between Harry and Draco is getting stronger :D Can't wait for more!