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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was soooo good!!!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They are getting soooo close. I can't wait for them to bond and since there is only one chapter left, I have a feeling that I will only have to wait a week. I love this story though, and will be sad to see it end.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely wonderful. I loved how Draco allowed Harry to take Severus in, and how they both spoke about their past. I love to see their relationship bloom :]
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story, I don't know if I've told you this before. They are so close to doing the dirty deed. I'm holding my breath here!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo need chapter 12! When are they going to bond? After the divorce? I don't think Ginny is going to give up easily! Though if she were to see how happy Harry is.... no even then she wouldn't.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a brilliant fiction. I absoulutely love it. I am also reading your other fic Building With Worn Out Tools and honestly had no intention of opening this fic. Because it had HET and Pansy/Draco and Harry/Ginny. I don't like HET nor do I read HET Harry Potter fics...but this was different and I knew it from the first chapter. I was weary the first couple of chapters but after awhile I just had to keep reading and see where it all went. And it was/is brilliant. I was surprised but awed and greatly pleased all the same.
It is one of the best Veela stories I have ever read as well. And, wait for it, it includes one sexual position or act that I don't see often in fan fictions; the position where Draco was making a move to "prepare" Harry for penetration dubbed the backside rub for lack of a better term. I personally think it is a sensual position and is very intimate and at time considerate and is the very reason why many authors don't think to put it their ficiton. Most writers here would rather boast NC, moresomes, bdsm, and literally list every "warning" to gross their readers into arousal. :D
yeah.
SO anyway. I love the fic and considered going back to review every chapter just so I can see your review count go up because it should be in the hunderds, this is such a good fic. But I am also aware that this fic is on more than one site and that it has been updated rather timely so to finish it in 12 weeks or more so it hasn't garnered the thousands of reviews a fic left to drag on for 3 years might. And I thank you for those timely updates. Personally I like to read finished fics although I do make exceptions for great writing. :D I am also reading every chapter of BWWOT as it comes out because I just love that fic.
Ta
It is one of the best Veela stories I have ever read as well. And, wait for it, it includes one sexual position or act that I don't see often in fan fictions; the position where Draco was making a move to "prepare" Harry for penetration dubbed the backside rub for lack of a better term. I personally think it is a sensual position and is very intimate and at time considerate and is the very reason why many authors don't think to put it their ficiton. Most writers here would rather boast NC, moresomes, bdsm, and literally list every "warning" to gross their readers into arousal. :D
yeah.
SO anyway. I love the fic and considered going back to review every chapter just so I can see your review count go up because it should be in the hunderds, this is such a good fic. But I am also aware that this fic is on more than one site and that it has been updated rather timely so to finish it in 12 weeks or more so it hasn't garnered the thousands of reviews a fic left to drag on for 3 years might. And I thank you for those timely updates. Personally I like to read finished fics although I do make exceptions for great writing. :D I am also reading every chapter of BWWOT as it comes out because I just love that fic.
Ta
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im so glad they're getting closer. finally!!!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum...I love this very much - esp. how the two shared and cared for each other, now they truly showed they have deep feelings, they plan to share life, they think as one and even act as one...they have so different backgrounds, but they try to find common grounds...
Afterall, there was some sadness in this story, and their happiness makes this piece more lovely.
Afterall, there was some sadness in this story, and their happiness makes this piece more lovely.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, the partership between Harry and Draco just bloomed throughout this chapter :) I am so happy! I can't wait to see what happens in the next installment
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm feeling really short-winded today so sorry :) My main though throughout most of this chapter was: 'AWWWWWWWW'. It was sweet and touching and meaningful and really nice to see. The building of Harry and Draco's relationship, the caring they have between the two of them, the fact that they're both truly happy. It's all really nice to see.
I can't wait for the next chapter, though I also find I wish they're story would just go on. It'll be the end right, because this was November and the last is December right?
I can't wait for the next chapter, though I also find I wish they're story would just go on. It'll be the end right, because this was November and the last is December right?