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for A Year's Temptation

by Lomonaaeren

person Jan
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just loved this story! Your Brilliant! ^_^
^_~
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i adored it!
person Gonrie
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honey... I think I'm in love with you!
You just...wow. Incredible writter is exactly what you are.
I'll defenitively go check for more stories from you and I hope to find somes.
You did an excellent work.
Gonrie
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great story writen by a great authoress. This story was wonderfully delightful. It flowed perfectly and I am so glad that I came acroos it.

Hoping to read more stories from you soon; your fan,

~ rAiNwAtEr ~
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you don't mind, but I recommended this fic to someone on Live Journal. There was, of course, talk about how brilliant your writing is, so I hope that is consolation if you don't like the idea of me giving links to this fic.
person Mdunlap
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. I haven't been on AFF much in the last year because some people were jerking us around, but this might be enough to bring me back on a regular basis. I love Veela!Draco stories, and this is one of the better ones. Thanks.
person cynaga
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely delightful~! Sad to hear there will be no sequel.
person NightLo
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally the two are magically and legally together, though the way to happiness and acceptance, as pointed out by them, is still way beyond reach...however, they have each other for support, which is not an easy thing to do...

This is a brilliant story, and the characters are by all...the most nearest to original ones I have ever read, I really did enjoy much, thanks for this good journey...

Hoping to read more of yours in the future.
person Annie
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:takes a deep deep deep breath: :exhales for a good ten seconds:

wow

I mean...

...hotdiggorydamnholymerlinwhatastory...wow.

I'm going to have to print this last chapter out and read it over and over and over again because it's so perfect, so passionate, so fucking raw that I can't help wanting to do anything else than cuddle the hell out of something right now...and wish I had a boyfriend really really badly, for once, so that I could cuddle him instead. Or maybe even have little Veela!Draco and HisMate!Harry dolls and squish the stuffings out of them.

The love scene was flawless. The feelings Harry experienced, from fear to fearless, were magnificent. The confession at the end was mind-blowing. Hell, even the divorce scene was outstanding.

I do wish that there would be more of this, but you gave so nice of a closure that I am actually more satisfied this way. I wish I can write like you do. Anyway, this story was a wonderful ride, and I hope to read more from you.

BTW, congrats on getting my longest review on this site =P
person caroll
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm so sad that this wonderfull fic has come to an end and that there'll be no sequel but thanks anyway it was awsome all twelve chap!
I'll try hard again to enjoy B.W.W.0. but in my opinion it's not as well written as AY's T, in wich the end leave the aftertaste of an unfinished business.
Still great plot and hope to read new intersting works in the future,hope there be more smutt in it (hihi).