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for A Year's Temptation

by Lomonaaeren

person Ms. Padfoot
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Please update soon!
person anngelik
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW and I thought the first chapter was wonderful but the second was even better, i cant wait to read the next.
person acr1228
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. good story, but I can't help hoping Harry and Draco end up together.
person Annie
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just...wow. I loved how you described the Veela need in Draco, and how Harry had to repay him for breaking his promise. I also liked your idea on how Hermione and Ron died. I really cannot wait for more =]
person NightLo
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...that would just be...an eternal hell...

It is good to see that Draco, after hearing Harry's confession, becomes more human. Maybe he is taunted by his veela, his unfortunate fate, his deflated ego, a possible great future in Quidditch...at last he chooses to comfort Harry.

However, after Harry's confession - I really wonder can he ever leave Ginny for Draco (if ever he feels anything towards Draco). The veela (perhaps later Draco) will use all his powers and will to cherish Harry, from all nightmares and hurt...however, after such a loss of friends and trusts, can Harry inflict cheating and hurt on 'innocent' Ginny?
person Langly78
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've read some fic w/ veela on it but this is the first time that i've actually enjoyed it. It's really interesting, almost painful. It's really hot but kind of sad in a way because they'll all connected.

One thing - I can't believe you killed Ron & Hermione in the most gruesome way. At least you didn't make Harry so fucked up because of it.
person Lady Lynn
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this story is fantastic. That was an amazing first chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
person Anon
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.... i am amazed at your awesomeness... AMAZED o.0
person Ms. Padfoot
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! genius! Simply genius!
person Extraho
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh. this is exciting. please update soon. im completly giddy.