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for A Year's Temptation

by Lomonaaeren

person Anon
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story, just so you know.
person acr1228
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. I really want Harry and draco to end up together...and yet I'd feel sad for pansy and ginny. You do a good job of making the characters real, and you've avoided making things easy.
person NightLo
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...it is already March, and great leap has been made - surprisingly out of the Ginny's incident and the nobility of one Malfoy...but not the selfishness for fame and money...is this an improvement?

If Draco somehow manages to accept the truth, can Harry handle that and submit? Will Ginny feel too desparate and too clumsy for her liability?
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Draco the wizard is falling for Harry as well! I sooo need chapter 4!
person Dezra
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of Harry and Draco to come together. Though it doesn't sound like it's meant to be. It's just heartbreaking to see them have to go through this.
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, Pansy was a bit pissed. Poor Ginny. I can't wait to see how everything works out the next month.
person Jolene
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is one of the best veela stories ever. I have read a lot of them and yours is so far perfectly what I would expect to see from Harry and Draco. Not all sappy ( Draco: I fell madly in love with Harry the moment I smelled him.)or (Harry: I will throw myself on the proverbial sword to save you Draco!) I think they both would fight and try to find a way around of course the inevitable. I think both Harry and Draco would be acting exactly the way they are in your story. I hope you don't drop this story like so many of the other decent veela stories are. BTW I also am loving D/H story. I love a seductive Draco.
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 3! Draco kissed him? Not the Veela? Draco respects him now. Not sure this is good. (Well good because I sooo want them together. But not for their marriages.)
person Lady Lynn
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter. I just love this story. That is a really really crappy thing Harry had to do, but he had to do it. I know that it would haunt me lik every minute of every day for the rest of my life. I wonder how long it will take for him to give in to the Veela... and Draco once Draco realizes that he wants Harry more than Pansy....will it take the entire year, and that just sucks for their wives if they did really ge ttogether. hmmm.
person Ms. Padfoot
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Please update soon!