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Yay, another great chapter. I still think you are the best Quidditch writer on here. I can't wait to see where this leads. Will Harry be getting a divorce? Can't wait for more.

Well...such delicately written, all feelings, emotions and thoughts are explained in details...and I am surprised to find out the crack down start with Ginny!

But it is true - she is hurt, helpless and acts like a burden, compare to Draco - he is bright, rich, beautiful/gorgeous, humorous/cunning-ness (it depends on Draco's words, not mine)...she is really facing a losing battle...

But maybe really Harry is too strain, unknown of how to live, how to be loved...he just takes...to much responsibility and never thought of why - simply he cannot protect himself. And that's the danger, and now such danger proves itself, if that is a friend, who is skilled in potions and been a friend before...well...linkages are limited - only Snape/Nott left!

Who will find out the hidden hurt first? Draco? Ginny? Or Kingsley? BTW, Pansy will pay deadly for her action...never trick a Malfoy - even she is Mrs. Malfoy!

This has been a good birthday, everytime I check there's a new chapter from a story I really enjoy and now yours has been added to the list.

Normally I don't enjoy stories like this, stories that have the potential to leave a person, or multiple persons, out in the cold. I'm one of those people who loves happy endings for everyone no matter how unrealistic that is in real life, though I do like the stories to still hold on to their realism.

But I love the story. I find I like the slow developing relationship between Draco and Harry. And I'm enjoying the chase. And it's interesting to see the slow crumbling of Harry's relationship with Ginny. It's nice that he loves her and feels so loyal to her, but when being with someone takes such effort to portray what you think they want to see, and when it makes you so exhausted trying to hard to be something/someone your not, to deny truths about yourself, then you should start thinking or re-thinking things.

Even if he doesn't stay go with Draco, I don't think he should stay with Ginny. She doesn't seem to truly make him happy, and now that she isn't as much of a... shield I guess, she's just plain making him unhappy. I truly feel for him in this story, more than anyone. More than Ginny or Pansy, and more than Draco. I hope in the end, that whatever happens, he ends up happy, even if the other 3 aren't.

WOW, I love veela fic's and this one is really good. I love your writing style, it's easy to read and understand. Plus, I've never read a really good quidditch scene until now. Kudo's to you, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Augh! I so want for them fo get together, but I dont want ginny to be that hurt. which is weird, because usually im all about hurting ginny. excellent chapter. i cant really point out any particular thing because i loved it in its entirelty, which doesnt usually happen, in the sense that theres usually a thing or two in anything that'll stick out. so yay, you!

Gorgeous fic, excellent plot and the characters are fantastic!!!!

Please update soon.

Aww they're getting deeply involved! I love how you described the Veela!Draco and Normal!Draco are both combinging into being one person. And please, Harry, in my opinion, is too disgustingly romantic with Ginny...she's too clingy...get her out of the picture, please! Oh, and Pansy too =D

This became the best Veela fic ever!And believe me I've read waaaaay too much Drarry veela fic).

So...feelings are mutual now, the only difference is - Draco has come to term with his, he admits, he plans and he acts, he is determined to get what he wants! While Harry...starts to have small noises with his subconscious - just great!

Really, both tried hard to ignore, argure and misguide their feelings, their falling for one another, it is this that makes....the frust more tasty and sinful...

And Draco is going to be sooo very angry when he finds out Harry is leaving for a month to Mexico. Sooo need chapter 5!