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for A Year's Temptation

by Lomonaaeren

person Trinity18
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story to death. I always await with baited breath for the next chapter. I love Veela stories, but yours in particular has touched me greatly. This chapter especially has brought out alot of emotions in me. I must say that I am happy and sad about Ginny leaving. She has never been a favorite character for me when people tie her with Harry. For me, she has never been strong enough or mature enough to be a counter part for Harry, and I always felt that she doesn't see Harry for who he is but what she wants him to be. Your Ginny as well as many I have read has always conciously or unconciously shown these faults. I'm happy she is gone because she is making Harry feel bad for doing something that she agreed with at the beginning. I'm sad because this is going to make Harry work twice as hard to be something that he isn't for her. If Ginny really loved him as much as she thinks she does, she would fight for him with him. I just hate that she is playing the victim in all of this. Your a magnificant writer and I can't wait to see how this all unfolds. Thank you for your time.
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 7! I'm wondering if it wasn't someone who fought with Harry in the war. She did say Harry would never guess. Pansy is truly evil.
person lena
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
something about this story is amazing and the writing is done so well, i can't wait for more.
person Annie
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww I feel so bad for Harry! I hope everything turns out better for him. And who is this brewer? Sorry, but did I miss something?
person acr1228
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. awesome chapter!! THis fic is GREAT. I adore Veela fics, but there are SO many 'same ol, same ol'. This is awesome. Though I want Harry to lock Pansy, Ginny, and Draco in a room and let them have some cheese with their wine, lol.
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo need chapter 6! Who is this person? They would only go after Harry? What was in the envelope that Pansy gave him?
person caroll
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad pooor Harry can't even find someone's shoulder to cry on.
But I 'm confused won't the weaselette see information about the letter in the pensieve?
He should have taken the holiday alone and just be alone.
By the way Pansy's move will only get blasted with the fury of the veela.
And I'm starting to wonder if guilt for killing Ron and hermione isn't part of the reason Harry got with Ginny.
person Danine
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So ggod! Love it!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, she'll be pissed but who cares... dud! that letter... i cannnot think of one persno it could be. rather, i can think of twenty and not decide! im sure youre going to keep it sectret for like the rest of the year, but damn. hell of a plot twist. i wonder what th things that annoy draco from that list are...
person Moyima
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I hate to imagine what info Pansy gave to Harry!