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for A Year's Temptation

by Lomonaaeren

person acr1228
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. It's amazing the way you've made Ginny such a villian in your other fic, yet she's so sympathetic in this one. ANd yet, both chracterizations can be drawn from the canon ginny!

I kind of hope that was a wake up call for Draco. He really ISN'T giving Harry anything, nor has he even thought about it.
person Moyima
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I can't wait to see how Draco reacts to that bit of news. Great chapter!
person Anon
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea of Ginny moving out. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
person caroll
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hip Hip Hourraah!!Ginny's gone!!!The bitch!
She was too annoying anyway!Harry did not sleep around on her and it was not adultery since she did consent to Harry helping Draco!She should have known that the Malfof's charm added to veela's power were not to be tested!She only got herself to blame !Harry asked her and she did give her accord.Now she's crying to mummy and making Harry guilty and miserable.
Harry is geting annoying too, he needs a good kick in the arse or a good shrink!(don't they have that at the ministry for their agents?) for always feeling guilty about things he doesn't have control over!Yes you killed your best friends but it was that or the rest of the wizarding world perishing!Stand up for yourself Harry!And let someone else take care of you!
And I loved the fact that Harry got to discuss with Fleur who has veela experience.Hope Harry will turn more to her in th future, if only for more Harry/Roxanne cuddling time.

PS:Pansy is such a slash fan!!!I'm sure those pcs are really for her personnal collection!
person Annie
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh dear. Harry is in one nasty ditch. And Pansy is such a bitch. omg I rhymed?? =O

I really cannot wait to see how this all turns out!
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is the enemy Neville? Sorry, thats just someone I wouldnt expect. I feel bad for harry that ginny left him, you've written it so well to show his love for her, eventhough hes not quite been there recently... But then again, I did expect them to break up because after all, it is a harry/draco. Or, could the enemy be Pansy?? that would be kind of funny...oh , wait. it couldnt be pansy because of he died before the year was up, draco wuld be dead as well. I wonder if theres any way for him to get rid of the photos> help of the elves? eh, she probably has copies somewhere else. damn. oh well. Loved the chapter!
person butterpie
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I suspect it might be Percy who is after Harry for revenge. Somehow I believe he knows how Ron and Hermione died at Harry's hands. Percy is the missing person at the Burrow because he is still somewhat estranged from his family. The only other possible suspects might be Bill or Charlie who maybe in with Percy to make Harry pay for their familys heartfelt loss. It's unfortunate that Ginny has decided to leave Harry in a very vunerable and difficult position right now alone with a very determined Veelian Malfoy. Both sides are clearly united in claiming their only mate once and for all. please do continue.
person Nolie664
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have so much respect for Ginny now. I really really adore her right now that i'm almost (i repeat almost) sad that its not a Harry/Ginny fic. The part about Pansy & Draco is disgusting *shudders*. I can't imagine how he can touch her. If I were him I'd probably trow up at the end. I hope that torture for Draco doesn't last. I'm actually feeling sorry for him too. Thank you for the really long updates.
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another great chapter. I love this fic. Now Ginny is gone, not divorced yet, and I'm dying to find out where this is going to go. I'm hoping that the playing field is cleared for Draco. And the way you've written Pansy, WOW, she's quite a force to be reckoned with. Plus I can't wait to find out who Harry's enemy is. Can you tell us if it is someone from the books or an original character? Please update soon.
person NightLo
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...if someone, like Harry, always need to remind oneself of what to do, what not to do, what should have done...etc - he/she will break down one day, being a small incident, a small gesture or others. If Harry is under great pressure, esp. one well-kept secret of having a 'secret enemy', he will lose his foresight, and this gives Draco more advantages (esp. given Ginny's decision).

For Pansy, I would only say she is stupid, she is too proud of herself, so sure of herself, and she is a Slytherin - one should know in order to be a winner, you should keep everything in control, including yourself - exposing your manipulation in this affair does her no good - as we can truly see this only infuriate Draco with his veela.

I don't know well what love is - given Ginny's situation, feeling of desparation is indeed very strong - but it only takes 6 months to destroy years of trust and marriage and...love. This is not a matter of who love who more, what do you share with...it is an issue of trust, I can only say Ginny may take a wrong action.

Lastly, Harry does need to know that...he deserves to be loved and protected as well... no matter how giving one person is, if his feeling is not returned, eventually he will die out, and I don't want to see something like this.