rate_review Reviews

i absolutely LOVE your writing!
you're very fluent and you write oh so erotic stories!

Please update!! I would demand that you update, but I don't want to make you mad! but pretty please?!?!

Hi Ms_Figg! This story is based on such a great idea, Severus becoming a gigolo and then giving it up - not for romantic reasons (I love that twist, it would have been corny if he'd quit for Hermine, besides it's so funny!) - to be with Hermine, it's so in character and at the same time not at all lol! The only thing that I'm wondering about are some of the statements he makes in Chapter 9 - like why does he insist on Hermine calling out his name, and is that something Hermine herself wants (considering he's giving her what she wants)? And why is he so full of himself, was he like that with all the women before and is giving Hermine his usual act, or is that what he truly is like, since this is something where he can be real? I just have a hard time imagining Severus being so full of himself - or at least, showing it, he seems more the quiet dignified type. I find it kinda distracting, not that it's a major distraction. I still just LOVE this fic, please continue writing it! I've read some of your other work, and you're a really good writer. All the best, Birdy

ARGHHH You are EBIL!!

*whimper .:. guh .:. melts*

"Whatever was under those boxers was barely restrained."

Aaahhhhh-oooooo-gah! The hotness is building. Great new chap!!!

It makes me squee with delight every time that I see that you have posted a new story! I LOVED this as a one-shot and am so happy that you decided to continue it! ! YOU ROCK. And, I added you as a friend on livejournal.

Make with the hotness of chapter 10!!! I'm dying! ;)

Yum Yum! :P

hi. I was reading this story and just had to stop and say I loved the cameo of Tonks and Kingsley. They were funny and cute together, not to mention hot. I laughed so hard about the tentacle thing that happened when Tonks came. You really come up with some interesting and entertaining scenarios to your stories. Thank you :)

OK I attached the review to the wrong story! Damn, see what happens when you're in a hurry after the "company picnic". LOL. I love Hermione saving Severus from the hag, and the concept of Sev as a gigolo, perfect actually ... punctual, detached, and delicious. But, the fire is a-burning, and he's a-yearnin'. Take care of yourself first woman. We'll wait. Pitt