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Nice... nice...
oh so very very good.
Worth the wait certainly.
I liked Severus's internal dialogue during the whole thing...
it made me giggle a bit that he was being so thoughtful at such a moment.
Awww Sevey's such a cutey!

Lucy: lol. I'm not sure if what Severus is doing mentally can be considered "being thoughtful." I kind of see it as "plotting." He's on a mission to secure a witch of his own thus protecting himself from future abductions (hopefully). So he's using his sexual prowess to hook Hermione. It seems romantic, but his motivations are very, very selfish and he's being extremely manipulative. But if it works, they'll both benefit because Hermione wants someone she can connect with. So I don't think he's being particularly thoughtful towards Hermione...but definitely Slytherin. :)

Dear merlin himself, connection, connect, connecting, connects, connected, any version, please? Pitt

Too short, too short!!!! You've been teasing us the past few chapters!!!!! You evil, evil writer you! Hehehee. Loving it, but DYING for the big bang, literally! lol. Update soooon pleaseeeeeeeeeee!

Yum Yum Yum! :D

Another great chapter Ms. Figg, very hot!

This continues to be sexy, sexy, sexy! Loved the description of Severus' Tool.

Gawwwwddd Dammmmn you are so so bad and i was so into it....you are a tease

I want... I want... MORE!

Very intimate so far though. :)

Hi Birdy: Call it "Peacock Syndrome" or salesmanship. All part of the role. He had to play it up...now as to whether he is playing it up for Hermione or not is a matter of conjecture. I prefer to think he isn't and it's sort of residual. lol. But the whole premise is so OOC that I'm just doing the best I can here. :) For him to even be a gigolo is wild, so there are going to be aspects that are wild as well. This is like beyond fantasy...but still fun.