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I loved it!!!!!!

now look what the little idea of yours came up with in the end :)
that truly was a very entertaining, funny, interesting and exciting story.
I had much fun reading this and am happy about the ending as well :D

am looking forward to new stuff of yours once you got sahara finished ^_^
hugs!

enjoyed it immensely.

Woooohooo! Sexy to the very end. And I love happy endings, no matter how fluffy.

Awww.... lovely. Could never imagine them any other way. Thank you for another wonderful story.

i like the ending. very sweet. the whole fic was great. it was very humorous. i enjoyed the storyline, it was so different. the closest i've read to severus being a gigolo are fics featuring severus with a secret, wild, and prolific sex life which never seemed to likely to me. anyway this is a good read and i enjoyed it.

Just read chapter 12. I think Hermione would experiment with angles and types of drops if she never had control on top before. Also didn't understand the "empirical" and the "tangent" part in the description of the sex scene. I know what the words mean, but I was puzzled by their use, not being a poet or author like you (that wasn't sarcasm Ruth).

Severus is so outrageous, isn't he? Taking a piss in front of Hermione, and putting her on the spot in front of Ms. Smoothly. I love that Hermione recommends Madam Nasty's House of whatnot and to "ask for Mario." Very, very Hermione.

Mwhahaa! Well, I rather LOVED the sappy ending. :)

Excellent Story!

I loved the ending! LOVED IT! Ms. Figg, you make the world a better place. Or, at least mine. ;) Great job!

Hey nonentity: All right. Let me try to explain it, though when writing lemons...my word choices just...well...came out in the heat of the moment, so to speak. Lol. Higher brain functions are pretty much on automatic ( or shut down completely depending how you look at it) when it comes to sex scenes. :::naughty grin:::: Anyway, tangent basically means "sharing a common point" and since they were both in climax...pretty self-explanatory. Now "empirical" well that's a little harder to explain though in this instance it basically means deriving understanding through experience rather than knowledge, or deriving knowledge by experience or observation alone. In other words, Hermione had never experienced anyone like Severus or a merging like she shared with the wizard and was reduced to her most primal parts. In fact, I think if I used the word "primal" my meaning would be much clearer. The use of the word "empirical" was probably the poet in me trying to assert itself when I wasn't looking. lol. Sorry they were distracting but am glad you enjoyed the story. *** (I might edit it and use "primal" instead. Thanks for commenting. :)