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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well done story, very well thought out, and well written. I'm not surprised that you have branched out into original fiction, and I well understand the demands that can make on your time.
A little tip: when I get writer's block, I go back a couple of chapters and read what I've written. Most of the time, I can continue from there.
Keep up the good work!
A little tip: when I get writer's block, I go back a couple of chapters and read what I've written. Most of the time, I can continue from there.
Keep up the good work!
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was good to see another chapter and an exciting one at that looking forward to the next update
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous story! I just found it today and have read all 16 chapters. I must say that I am impressed! I LOVED seeing Lucius (who is my fave character and is played perfectly by Jason Isaacs... mmmmmm Jason Isaacs.. lol) pleasure Hermione before he had his body and to see them now having the kind of sex that requires a safety word is just too much! I LOVE IT! lol
Keep up the great work! I hope to see another chapter soon!
Keep up the great work! I hope to see another chapter soon!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is wonderful to hear that you have a published work on the way - will you give more details (Title, Author, ISBN number), so we can get hold of it?
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay u updated i loveeee this!
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update Shilou. Can't wait for more.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear that you've got writters block with your second book ~ OK, that's a lie .... I'm not sorry because it got us another chappie here Well, maybe a bit,I'm sure after I finish reading your first book (which I ordered yesterday), I'll be chomping at the bit for you to finish the next in the series ~ Gods, I'm brutal, aren't I? *BIG evil grin*
As always, thank you for another wonderful chapter.....You know, I was never interested in stories with a Lucius pairing, until I started reading yours, now I find myself hopelessly devoted to the pairing & haven't even bothered to look for any Sirius stories since LOL Guess I should consider a name change, huh?
Looking forward to your next update & good luck with the new book!
As always, thank you for another wonderful chapter.....You know, I was never interested in stories with a Lucius pairing, until I started reading yours, now I find myself hopelessly devoted to the pairing & haven't even bothered to look for any Sirius stories since LOL Guess I should consider a name change, huh?
Looking forward to your next update & good luck with the new book!
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I bypassed this story a few times before deciding to delve in and read but gee I'm glad I did! Very nice storyline ad different from the usual Lucius/Hermione ship.
Great effort and keep up the good work!
Great effort and keep up the good work!
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. I hope that Lucius and Hermione can stay safe while trapped in their room. I hope that they can eventually get out. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY MORE MORE MORE MORE