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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh I likes, i likes. In fact, I request that you hurry with the next chapter! :D
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: This is getting hotter by the sentence. Did Hermione just invite Lucius to share the boudoir with her?
So his body is somewhere on the estate. Or just in the mansion. With so many hidden places, they'll have chapters and chapters to investigate. while they're investigating each other. Does Lucius take off his clothes, too, to go to bed even in noncorporeal form? PLEASE say yes.
Why he didn't start checking out the less obvious places himself is a mystery of its own. Does he need a solid person for some of those areas?
Lucius could scrub her back in the tub. And front. 8-)
This was a lovely step forward in your story. I want more, of course. Those two together are smoking hot.
So his body is somewhere on the estate. Or just in the mansion. With so many hidden places, they'll have chapters and chapters to investigate. while they're investigating each other. Does Lucius take off his clothes, too, to go to bed even in noncorporeal form? PLEASE say yes.
Why he didn't start checking out the less obvious places himself is a mystery of its own. Does he need a solid person for some of those areas?
Lucius could scrub her back in the tub. And front. 8-)
This was a lovely step forward in your story. I want more, of course. Those two together are smoking hot.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 Aha! you've added a little rub to the story...someone has hurt Hermione. You certainly know how to maintain interest.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is a daring girl. I wish we had a better view of Lucius' reaction. Update soon!
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are a tease. Love your fanfics, just keep them coming. Can't wait for the next update.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Another great chapter! I
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter! Oooo... he's gonna make Hermoine's life very difficult, huh? Hope she gives him hell tooo. Update SOOOON PLEASEEE!
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is sweet...keep up the good work
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Ahhh! Hermione can now see Lucius. Can she only see him when he's in a rage? Or can she see him all the time now? If so, why?
What do I want to have happen next? Surely you jest. Can she see - and feel him when it's another kind of emotion besides rage? That would keep her up all night. If he's up. (prurient snicker)
Otherwise, I imagine he's going to be a fixture in her bedroom - and bathroom - never letting her have any privacy. Perks for him while trying to drive her away. Win-win for Lucius, I'd say.
At least it gives him something to do while he tries to figure out where his body went. Can Hermione help him with that? She's always been good at research. Maybe she can provide some insight into the riddle of his missing body with a study of separating souls and how one must do it - if there are any rules for storing a body that must be followed. Is he tied to the house or can he travel places with her investigating clues to the hidden spot where his body resides? Lucius is not your laid back stay-at-home kinda guy, so her advent must soon be viewed by him as a positive thing, even though right now Lucius wants her gone from his home. Of course, as she grows on him, he's still under no compulsion to tell her he likes having her in his home.
I DO like this story line. It has a lot of possibilities and you're more than capable of weaving your way through a delightful array of them. I can't wait for the next chapter. Our "delectable Jason Isaacs' Lucius" will have to tide me over while I wait. Uh, hmmm, take your time with the next chapter, huh? I got me a Slytherin to tame. Grrrrrwwwrr!!
What do I want to have happen next? Surely you jest. Can she see - and feel him when it's another kind of emotion besides rage? That would keep her up all night. If he's up. (prurient snicker)
Otherwise, I imagine he's going to be a fixture in her bedroom - and bathroom - never letting her have any privacy. Perks for him while trying to drive her away. Win-win for Lucius, I'd say.
At least it gives him something to do while he tries to figure out where his body went. Can Hermione help him with that? She's always been good at research. Maybe she can provide some insight into the riddle of his missing body with a study of separating souls and how one must do it - if there are any rules for storing a body that must be followed. Is he tied to the house or can he travel places with her investigating clues to the hidden spot where his body resides? Lucius is not your laid back stay-at-home kinda guy, so her advent must soon be viewed by him as a positive thing, even though right now Lucius wants her gone from his home. Of course, as she grows on him, he's still under no compulsion to tell her he likes having her in his home.
I DO like this story line. It has a lot of possibilities and you're more than capable of weaving your way through a delightful array of them. I can't wait for the next chapter. Our "delectable Jason Isaacs' Lucius" will have to tide me over while I wait. Uh, hmmm, take your time with the next chapter, huh? I got me a Slytherin to tame. Grrrrrwwwrr!!